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18h c25 Guest
This book is epic and I love how it stopped following cannon. Please keep updating.
21h c25 GalanthaDreams
You know, I've picked up 3 of your stories in a row and have been unable to p ut them down. I just have to say that these are all extremely well written and your characterization not only makes sense but also rings true.
1/4 c25 2acetwolf94
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
1/4 c25 Kyr
LOL. ;D Thanks for sharing.
1/4 c25 OldLonBird
I love that you've made clear the Dixon siblings aren't ones to look for the unnecessary drama, just not inclined to back down from a fight if someone else starts one at this point in their lives. From the very start, their focus has been on survival, not pettiness. They are alert in what is after all a very dangerous world, the full risks of which the other group keep demonstrating they still haven't woken up to. In contrast, Shane comes across as more and more insecure in his leadership, it wasn't necessary to snatch the radio mike from Amy like that but he just can't help himself.

Marie's awareness that her little group is still very much outsiders despite all they have done for the others is poignant. I can't help thinking that they'll politely make it clear to Deputy Dipshit & Dumbass that they are capable of making their own decisions as to what is best for themselves and their charges when the time comes.

Merle's reaction to Deputy Dipshit's BFF showing up and trying to take charge should be very entertaining since Shane has long since irked his last nerve. Is Marie gonna open a can of whoop-ass for the danger Rick has put her brother in with his reckless horse ride into the city? After all, she's let Shane know several times she doesn't appreciate him putting her brother at risk. Of course, both Dixons will back her up, because they are incredibly loyal and Glenn is now part of their family unit. The other group of adults may witness a moving display of solidarity between our Fab Four & their tiny apprentices, including the children from Shane's group that shakes them up a bit.

Q. I can see the Fab Four having set up some type of perimeter alarm around their small section of the camp, for extra security since they took on care of 3 small children. Could this save more lives than in the original TV series? Ed's still gotta get eaten tho, just cos he deserves it.

Is poor Sophia still going to go missing on the journey to the Greene farm? Will having two competent trackers instead of just one enables her to be found before the worst happens? I cannot see Marie being denied the right to carry arms on the highway, which is going to make Andrea's reaction interesting. Marie has proven she CAN keep up with the boys lol!
1/3 c25 1Bakusatsou
So I was going to offer my assistance as being a beta but I see that you found one! However, if in the future you ever need one let me know cause I would love to help!

I'm really loving the Merle your portraying here. He's still our favorite stubborn, sometimes asshole Dixon, but there's a soft side there that I can't wait to get to know more of! Honestly knowing that you plan on keeping Merle around I can't wait to see what's going to change. I never really liked Lori, and I felt like Shane had potential but not gonna lie I just wanted him gone by the end of season two. He was so much drama and I felt like I was always looking for when he would fuck stuff up again. lol

That being said I have always loved Glenn! I'm loving your character and I'm happy to see how she's already changing things. Glenn defiantly needed to grow a back bone, but I still hope over time the parts of the group that I love and enjoy will all start growing that family feeling soon! I'm super excited to see the future characters and what you plan on doing with them all!

I can't wait to see the romance between Daryl and Marie. I can see it being awkward on his part, and Marie only feeling slightly more confident considering how she also has really no past relationships to go off of. I get to giddy just thinking about it! I don't know how closely you plan on following canon or what but no matter what I am so looking forward to it!

Can't wait until the next update but take however long you need to. I understand completely on getting too busy or just not having any inspiration. So I'll be here waiting until then!
1/3 c19 Bakusatsou
So I was going to wait to review until I finished reading but I just couldn't! I almost started to cry during this chapter, it was packed full of emotion, and honestly who wouldn't cry over something like that. I tend to also want to add children into my stories. I feel as if it just brings on a level of humanity and something extra to stories like these.

I feel like I'd be a lot like Marie though, I would be way to soft when it comes to children, but that's not really a bad thing in my opinion. Though I'm sure it would be my downfall, and my stength.

I'm loving how you had the Rhee siblings get close to the Dixons. I'm personally in love with Merle's character ever since watching the show for the first time. I just felt like there was a lot more to him than met the eye, and when everything went down in season three I knew I was right! I bawled when I watched what happened to him. There's not enough stories out there that do Merle justice in my opinion.

This story is so amazing and I have a crap ton more things I could be saying but I plan on reviewing again so I'll ramble on about how much I love this story when I catch up lol.

Again this is amazing and I'm happy that I took the chance and read this story!
1/3 c25 Hi.Ruby
Great chapter as always. Can’t wait to the next update. Thank you
1/3 c25 1tisha b
Happy new year! Hopefully things start to look a little brighter this year, probably not but I'm holding out hope. I can't wait for season 1 to really kick off and see how you adapt and change things up. I especially want to see what you do with the whole walker camp invasion and whether Amy's fate stays the same because she seems to be Marie's only friend close to her age from the other group. I think they could have done more with her character if they hadn't killed her off so soon and I probably would have liked her a lot more than Andrea. Maybe there's more daycare workers on this site because we tend to have big imaginations, we kind of need to to work and play with children. Its a nicer way of saying we're all just big kids at heart :)
1/3 c25 Beachgirl25
As you know I am a big fan of Michonne and Andre! I hope you introduce them soon.I always wondered how the group would react to a single women with a child looking for shelter. I think Lori would see Michonne as a threat to her relationship with Shane if Rick was not around or if she and Rick broke would also try to pigeon hold Michonne into a 50’s housewife! Hahahha
I would love to see Michonne immediately see through Merle’s b.s. and set her boundaries. I think between the two camps the Dixion-Rhee camp would accept Michonne into their folds first. The positive interaction between Michinne and the Dixions would help everyone (Jacqui, T-dog and Morales) begin to see the real Merle.
I agree with Marie Merle would make a great dad! The imagine of him being a jungle gym was priceless!
So glad Marie recognized the signs of abuse! It will help her forge a stronger relationship with the Dixions.
Who was on the CB? Was it Rick, Michonne and her boyfriend, Paul, Ty and Sasha, Abe and his group? I want to know who was calling and what the group was having a hissy fit about! Did the group call them and say they were trapped! If so Shane is about to lose his hide! ROFL!
I have always wondered what would happen if Tyand Sasha prepper neighbor had lived. How would his knowledge change the group? What was his profession...solider doctor, engineer, plumber? How would this guy change the story?
Can't wait to see what happens next!
1/2 c24 BeixuanSect
Excited about what's gonna come next.
1/1 c24 Kyr
Happy New Year! Congrats on exams.
Nicely done. Still questioning Shane’s sincerity, for several reasons based upon the characters you’ve chosen for the run. But, with Rick returning?, depending on the character background Shane is given, maybe he’ll transfer his devotion to Marie and family.
(Merle gives Futago hard stare. “If ya make me have ta be family like with Shane,” Merle sneers, “ he betta act right ‘round me or I WILL stick him.” Merle continues to sharpen his knife. Kyr cackling and cheering)
12/30/2020 c24 Angelic Reaper13
so happy for the update. Can't wait for the next one. really love dis story
12/29/2020 c24 2acetwolf94
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
12/29/2020 c24 nagi92
Aah I'm glad for Merle! And congrats for your finals, and merry Christmas!
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