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1/4 c5 sparkleandshineyourday
Is the new chapter ready yet?
1/3 c1 Guest
TEENS IN A FROG WORLD!

"I'm telling you guys, I heard someone in there!" Sprig said as he pulls Frank and Anne to a cave.

"How do you know that?" Frank asked with some skepticism.

"Just listen." Sprig then turns to the cave and shouts.

"Hey are you still in there?!"

"In there?!" An echo repeats.

"Are you okay?!"

"Okay?!"

"See?!" Sprig asks as he turns back to the human teens . "We gotta help him!"

Anne shakes her with amusement.

"Dude relax." Anne said to reassure him. "It's just your echo."

Sprig gets confused and says "What?"

"She's right, that's just an echo." Frank said "Watch."

Frank turns to the cave and shouts. "Hello!"

"Hello!" The echo repeats. Sprig then realizes his mistake.

"Oh you're right, that was stupid of me."

Sprig then shouts to the cave.

"Have a nice day!"

"Thanks you too!" The cave says surprising Frank and Anne.

"Well I'm a very pleasant person." Sprig said as he walks off, leaving Frank and Anne to wonder what just happened.
11/28/2020 c5 djrayquaza1
Another chapter plis i lo e this much
11/16/2020 c5 Guest
Have you try making a lime chapter of your rated T fanfic. Lime is different then Lemon. Lime have no sexual contact just pure, unadulterated love and cuddle kisses while lemon are all about the birds and the bees. If you don't want to it's okay I'm just curious that's all.

Anyway love the story and stay healthy and be safe.
11/12/2020 c5 LockieBoy1819
Awesome chapter mate love how you made this chapter like primal I watch that episode and it was great good job, can't wait for more updates on your story's, Please update Godzilla the titan-slayer of Fairy Tail love that story too keep it up.
11/11/2020 c5 Sean
Update Godzilla: The Titan-Slayer of Fairy Tail please
11/6/2020 c5 King of 2211
Don't suppose you could make "The Princess from Another Dimension" after you make Illegals?
11/5/2020 c1 Xenoblade899
Wow I can't believe how well primal can be mixed with amphibia its basically the same but instead of dinosaurs its insects and reptiles, also amphibians and arachnids can't forget about those now. you really wrote this well and I hope to see more in the future also good luck with college it can be stressful I would know I attend it too, but remember don't feel too pressured to finish your stories and don't forget to take breaks once in while okay. Take care
10/30/2020 c5 Welkin
Oooooo, conflict. You're doing pretty good with developing the two's friendship, it feels natural and a fight would break out inevitably. I still do say that the whole room problem they share still needs some solving, though.
I haven't watch Primal so I guess these are abit spoilery but I'm cool with it and you're giving me a thought to check the show out. How do you even mix the savagery with the whole heartful interactions? You blend them together so well.
10/30/2020 c5 7RedHood001
I IMMEDIATELY KNEW THE EPISODE AS SOON AS THAT TITLE APPEARED!

It was a clever choice to have a Beetle as the replacement for the Mammoth. I actually felt so bad for the Beetle in the first, even knowing what was going to happen. The way you wrote the behavior and the feel of the situation itself was beyond spectacular. I was so immersed in the characters.

I actually like how you added the conflict between Frank and Sasha since they are only just starting to reconcile. Your characterization is, as always, spectacular. The way that Hop Pop got to share some wisdom and Sprig trying to find a solution. Brilliant.

The way you wrote the Herd really struck me. I can just see the look Frank gave the Patriarch as if I was there. I really like the way Frank apologized. He knows what he did was wrong. This is such a grey area of nature taking its course since the Plantars needed the meat while the Beetle deserved to live until its natural death.

Such a beautiful chapter! I hope you make more like it. Very well done!
10/29/2020 c5 8kyrogue23
That intro was really almost like how the primal episode was and I wish Anne and Frank chose a different one that wasn't with it's pack. Sprig better know that what he just did will probably be one of the moments scar the two teens for their lives. After fighting off those ants, they should of warm up to each other but Sprig plan seems to already be failing.
That battle with the whole herd was good and now they both finally learn how to live with each , even if they will argue a lot. This was Primal second saddest moment for me and can't wait to see how the finale is.
10/29/2020 c5 3coldblue2015
Thanks for this chapter and Happy Halloween!

"A Hard Death":

I love "Primal"...It sort of tells a interesting story about the main characters and side/one-shot characters. Frank taking on Spear role and Anne role as Fang, was great! Nice job with the Elephant Beetles. It rather interesting...I cannot wait to read YOUR version of "Terror Under the Blood Moon", given the Bats and Spider are good antagonist that Frank and Anne would face in "Amphibia" world. The only thing I would add..."Rage of the Ape-Men" and "Scent of Prey" being one large chapter...that would be awesome.

Frank and Anne:

There friendship is...rocky. Anne is very self-centered about her problems, while Frank is strong-willed to voice his own grievance. I could only imagine what it would be like to return to their World, given what they have experience. Frank is a serious person and has a soft side to him long for friendship. Anne is trying to achieve what she desires, but she feels guilt for what she sacrifices. I just hope...Anne realize what type of friendship she has with Frank, because Frank would never let Anne die and probably...die for her.

Elephant Beetle:

Good job with capturing the Mammoths emotions from "A Cold Death" in "Primal"...Animals or Insects do have their own forms of empathy and dangerous world they live in. Elephant Beetles have hard shell and plenty of meat...They know they are hunted because of this and are in small numbers. Still, they give fight back to those who wish to do harm to their own...It was sad seeing the old Elephant Beetle die, but life is survival of the fittest and it is a bitter reality...Still, his pack/herd remember him and paid their respect to their fallen...

Sorry for the short review.

Stay safe and stay healthy!
10/29/2020 c5 12francisthewitcher
This is definitely my favorite chapter of this story, I love Primal and you did a good job doing a reference with this chapter. I really enjoyed the detail in which Anne and Frank are still barely getting along ever since the incident, and honestly, I was waiting for the moment they would have physical fighting.

The action scenes are pretty good too, I really love to see Anne and Frank being a badass team. And I look forward to more emotional scenes, you never fail us to give us drama.
10/29/2020 c5 11OMAC001
This was EXCELLENT! You should blend more Primal concepts, it seems to fit in well. Like a certain 'Feeder' being a story in "The Shut-In" but that's for later. Hope the next update for this story comes soon!
10/29/2020 c5 NJred2000
You make amazing stories I respect you. Also can you make Frank do a couple scene in Rambo movies. Is just when I see him using his Knife and the way he fight brutally he reminded of Rambo...well not much but still keep up the good work and Be clean and Safe safe. Be prepare for I am about to draw Frank and Anne as a couple after I am finish the drawing of Luz, Booker and Amity being together.
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