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10/29/2020 c14 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Really nice story and enjoyed it! Going to read the dragon surge soon now after catching up
9/26/2020 c14 2merendinoemiliano
Best of luck with everything.
9/26/2020 c15 merendinoemiliano
Sorry, I didn't notice the new chapters before, amazing job as much brief
9/20/2020 c15 nightmaster000
AWESOME! Very very nice it's going to be great to see Dracon back in action, haven't seen much of him in GrimmFall outside of Ragnarok and Shinkalion Rising.
9/20/2020 c14 nightmaster000
So this wonderful story comes to a close but it was a fantastic ride and i'm pumped for what comes next.

That scene with Railspike at the beach is still wonderful and absolutely perfect, really think it shows at how far he's come from how he was at the start of the picture. True still haunted by his past and Sammael's shadow, but now more at peace with it and ready to rejoin the fight and war against Sammael and those like him.

Not to mention ready to train the Shinkalions and turn these sparklings into real warriors.

My other favorite scene has to be that confrontation between Tezuka and Genki a very great touch there in my opinion. As while it's clear Tezuka won't be letting this distrust and grudge die anytime soon, Genki makes more bluntly clear she has interest in indulging it.

She certainly showed how she got her reputation not just in the Hunter community but also business world when she put Tezuka in her place like that. I will admit curious if Tezuka will be playing part in Dani's escort in the main story? Something to find out later I suppose.

Finally that little scene with Moloch and Nightstreak was a great touch, reminds us that their still out there and the danger still exists with it being far far far from over. I do wonder what delicious evil idea Nightstreak is cooking up in that sadistic mainframe of his.
9/20/2020 c13 nightmaster000
Got some catching up to do huh? But really quite a treat to enjoy multiple new chapters at once. On this one wonderful work as always, and really like the main story tie in with Dani angle.

The Shinkalions playing escort and extra protection for Dani as they take her to the Shiga Highlands is a wonderful twist.

Though what really caught my attention this chapter was Railspike was seeing a face from his past, though now twisted and corrupted in Nightstreak, and LOVED the clash there. Seriously as always you do wonderful work with the fight scenes.

Second encounter with a Fallen and the Shinkalions once more stand triumph not bad not bad at all. :) Also once again really loving how your writing Nighstreak so insane and sadistic quite a villain.
9/19/2020 c13 96Lord Maximus
Glad you liked the scene. Might have something more to add later.
9/19/2020 c13 2merendinoemiliano
Pretty badass chapter, curious to see next events and same requestions. Good work.
9/13/2020 c12 nightmaster000
Been a bit busy this weekend but finally had the chance to check out your last update, and as always spectacular work with some epic action! :)

I really love what you did with the scene idea I sent your for Kuni, it was perfect! :) Made for a great intense moment with Railspike pulling off a rescue just in time, as well as heartwarming when she was reunited with her family.

Hmm the fact that she thought of Dani with a desire to meet her one more time before he end, well it causes me to wonder if Dani not only has a fan but someone crushing on her in Kuni?

The files shared this chapter particularly the one about Zero Day, the anniversary of 2-BO's original rampage was a excellent informative touch. As we learn over two hundred people died because of 2-BO with hundred more injured, and that was twenty years ago before the latest upgrades to him.

But yeah a great touch of lore that went into the pain and suffering that Akita has caused with his rogue android. As well as helps add further depth to not only Tezuka's hatred of robots and AI, but her determination to take down 2-BO once and for all.

Hmm one thing I can't help but wonder is if 2-BO ever becomes closer to what he's like as Boyd in Ducktales, how he might deal with the shadow of his past actions looming over him? Though that's mainly a stray thought as for all we know 2-BO will end up destroyed for good at the end of this tale.

Though as lined out by Vector Prime that likely just one particular path the future can take, after all there's a future where 2-BO claims victory and kills them instead.

Which have to say LOVE that part of the chapter that went into potential futures this train tracks path can take, plus all the futures listed out and explained sounded quite interesting to say the least.

Also loving the seeds of a new threat planted at the end of the chapter that will tie into and be brought into things in Intertwined Legacies. Though can't help but point out that if the choice is between saving lives or saving some old building think Tsuranuki would obviously choose to save the lives.

I mean he's interested in engineering but interested enough to sacrifice someones life over it? Find that a bit hard to buy, though suppose to be fair he's still young and the young can act rashly without fully thinking through their actions.

Anyway as always wonderful work and look forward to what happens next.
9/13/2020 c12 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Interesting how some events happened and the future possibilities could happen, so what would this new Grimm be then? Can’t wait to find out
9/12/2020 c12 96Lord Maximus
Break out the snacks and drinks! We got action on the way!
9/12/2020 c12 12D.N.Works
Yep. Popcorn will be needed for the next part.
9/12/2020 c11 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
So railspike has a new look? Cool!
9/12/2020 c12 2merendinoemiliano
Very badass and detailed battle,curious to see who new Huntsmen will arrive now since E-Male should probably return soon, if you want I could also have an idea about the new Sam-R-I if you didn't already discussed it with the other authors.
9/2/2020 c11 96Lord Maximus
Loved the action and the Stan Lee cameo. No can have enough of Stan Lee and his cameos.
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