11/10/2020 c5 Guest
aww! cute. :D
Halt does seem like a cat person. I like Luna and all the trouble she keeps managing to cause! XD
please continue you are a great writer!
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aww! cute. :D
Halt does seem like a cat person. I like Luna and all the trouble she keeps managing to cause! XD
please continue you are a great writer!
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11/11/2020 c5 29AreiaCannaid
Awww those two shorts were lovely. I especially liked the kitten chase part. Poor Luna. XD
Thanks so much for writing’
Awww those two shorts were lovely. I especially liked the kitten chase part. Poor Luna. XD
Thanks so much for writing’
6/16/2020 c2 marcelinedenny
idk why but i died laughing when i read 'gallican toast'.
idk why but i died laughing when i read 'gallican toast'.
5/26/2020 c4 Bordercolliejet
Another great chapter. Poor Halt, Luna deprived him of an afternoon of paperwork.
Another great chapter. Poor Halt, Luna deprived him of an afternoon of paperwork.
5/23/2020 c3 3danceawaygirl
You've got Halt's attitude down perfectly. Made me laugh! So cute and gruff! Good writing, can't wait for next one.
You've got Halt's attitude down perfectly. Made me laugh! So cute and gruff! Good writing, can't wait for next one.
5/22/2020 c3 7ElvishKiwi's favourite sister
Yes, yes, YES! Very good! Well done! Ette is liking this story very much.
Ahem, sorry 'bout that. Yes, very nice story. Your editor is still slacking, but it has come to my attention that she has also reviewed, so I may let her off the hook with only a few scars. She will still be disciplined, but less severely, I think.
This chapter is probably my favourite yet. I thank you for sharing with it and wish you many blessings.
Yes, yes, YES! Very good! Well done! Ette is liking this story very much.
Ahem, sorry 'bout that. Yes, very nice story. Your editor is still slacking, but it has come to my attention that she has also reviewed, so I may let her off the hook with only a few scars. She will still be disciplined, but less severely, I think.
This chapter is probably my favourite yet. I thank you for sharing with it and wish you many blessings.
5/22/2020 c2 ElvishKiwi's favourite sister
When you were young...
That Gallican toast sounds really yum and really familiar.
Luna is an interesting character. This story could turn interesting. (Not that it isn't interesting already, but it could turn even more interesting)
I will get your editor to fulfill her duties if it's the last thing I do. She must brainstorm with you, and correct your grammar mistakes.
Thanks for sharing and God bless! (Mind if I give her a good whipping?)
When you were young...
That Gallican toast sounds really yum and really familiar.
Luna is an interesting character. This story could turn interesting. (Not that it isn't interesting already, but it could turn even more interesting)
I will get your editor to fulfill her duties if it's the last thing I do. She must brainstorm with you, and correct your grammar mistakes.
Thanks for sharing and God bless! (Mind if I give her a good whipping?)
5/22/2020 c1 ElvishKiwi's favourite sister
Fascinating! So what you're saying is...
Halt has a cat. Quite an interesting idea, and certainly grounded in evidence. Well done.
Your inspiration for this story is absolutely adorable. Please give her my congratulations.
Your editor has been slacking. I don't think she even looked at this story before you posted it and it took her several days to review. Give me her details and I'll get her back in line.
Thanks for sharing and God bless!
Fascinating! So what you're saying is...
Halt has a cat. Quite an interesting idea, and certainly grounded in evidence. Well done.
Your inspiration for this story is absolutely adorable. Please give her my congratulations.
Your editor has been slacking. I don't think she even looked at this story before you posted it and it took her several days to review. Give me her details and I'll get her back in line.
Thanks for sharing and God bless!
5/22/2020 c1 1Marleycatblack
Great job Ebony!
Your writing is really good and I can't wait to read more.
Great job Ebony!
Your writing is really good and I can't wait to read more.