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5/27/2020 c1 Fenguin
Man this was good
5/23/2020 c1 2loremipsxm
I had actually totally forgotten that in this AU we still didn't know how much Hei, Misaki, and Naoyasu know about Naoyasu's involvement in the Syndicate. This is a great point of tension in the relationship between all three of them and while idk what your plans are for this AU but I would loooove to see the fallout of Misaki discovering the truth some day. Omg the juicy drama. I love how both Naoyasu and Hei love Misaki so much and yet even Hei, who isn't prone to hiding secrets from Misaki (anymore), still in a way agrees with Naoyasu about concealing his involvement. I can only imagine Misaki would be angry with Hei for maybe a long time if she found out he knew.
5/22/2020 c1 9Dear4Life
Well when I first started reading this, I thought Hei and her father were not on good terms because he was going to walk in on them. Then, when they were eating, I was just waiting for it.
Loved it! I would love to read more interactions with them.
Thanks again.
5/21/2020 c1 13Bleu Tsuki
OMG! I cringed for Hei and smiled the entire time reading this fic! It was soooo good. Poor Hei, to go through all of that from her dad...
Maybe one day her dad and Hei can work things out...maybe. I might have to read back the Office in sequence to make sure I didn't miss any scenes. How can you even keep track of the order?
And I wouldn't mind Hei making me beer-battered shrimp. O.O
5/21/2020 c1 1Sinthija
This was so amazing! I just love the interaction between Hei, Misaki and her father. Priceless!
5/21/2020 c1 7J Luc Pitard
Beautiful interactions! And that last line is absolutely what everyone truly in love thinks. Heck, I've been with my love for um... a very long time and I still think they're better than I deserve. Sigh. Nicely written.
5/19/2020 c1 1LayLay lives
Awkward. Well, now I know the back story of why Kirihara's father doesn't like Hei. When he finds out that they are sleeping together the crap will hit the fan. (Keeping my comments K)
5/19/2020 c1 ELinkA
Thank you!

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