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11/8/2020 c6 4phelipebr
Excelente capítulo
Esperando pelos próximos
11/8/2020 c3 phelipebr
Estou ansioso pelos próximos capítulos
10/24/2020 c6 95TMI Fairy
Mata el cabron estupido!
9/10/2020 c6 5Kian Xki
When i read the battle i feel like Jumping from My seat and Shouting "YEAH! "

No NERF at all, this is Great
8/8/2020 c1 Stakoza45
Louise is probably the luckiest girl in the world if she is getting Reinhardt
7/31/2020 c6 3OechsnerC
Awesome story. Looking forward to reading more.
7/18/2020 c6 TruthEnforcere
Good story, thanks to Chris for translating. Lets see where this goes
7/18/2020 c6 EmperorCeph
During the fight with Guiche can you have Reece do the glowy sword bomb attack that Reinhard did against Elsa?
I mean, sure, there’s the fact that he isn’t as dangerous as Elsa, but it would probably look good in his image or something since many are doubting his status as a ‘noble’ or ‘knight’ or whatever.

He IS op, so why not just make him use OP moves a lot, he’s got hundreds of skills or whatever and no one could ever possibly list down all his skills.

I really can’t wait for future parts where he just beats every bad guy hard, making them know that he’s pretty much invincible.
6/30/2020 c4 Guest
no estuvo mal
6/9/2020 c5 Joao Vitor Ronchi
cool the story
6/9/2020 c5 2tarrasque698
Estuve leyendo sobre Reinhard y esto que encontre me mato:
Protección Divina de la Vestimenta: Lo hace capaz de poder elegir una ropa adecuada para cualquier persona.
Protección Divina de la Nube (雲の加護, Kumo no Kago): Le permite caminar sobre las nubes.
6/9/2020 c5 EmperorCeph
Thanks for answering my questions. I don’t really have much questions but I do have some things to point out about your writing. I think it’s called constructive criticism.

In the some of the previous chapters and near the beginning of this chapter you have a a big block of text of information and it’s sometimes hard to keep track of where you were reading. It’s also hard to absorb in some of the information and move on if it’s a big block of text instead of small paragraphs of 3 to 5 lines.

You should try adding in more line breaks to tell when the scene has changed or when time has skipped such as when Siesta and Reece have moved outside or back inside. Here’s an example for next chapter

1: Reece wakes up
2: Reece gets ready
3: Reece is ready
4: Linebreak
5: Reece is outside of Louise’s door to wake her up.

Something like that. But, if in the future you start writing really long stories, try putting some text down such as

Scene Change:

So that when people skim through a story, they can just ctrl f and type that to find a part of the chapter they like. You can find oblivion2991 doing this in their stories.

And one last thing.

When characters are speaking, please use “these” instead of -these-. It’s kind of odd seeing hyphens being used instead of quotation marks.

If I have any questions, I’ll probably just PM you.
See you next chapter
5/28/2020 c3 Dcwestby
Instead of Isekainated, should be Isekai-ed or some form thereof. You could also use the term transposed if you like as well.
5/28/2020 c2 dcwestby
Yeah, I can sympathize with language learning. French is second language, but I also know some spanish/Mexican... Its difficult to master if you can't be immersed into the language you're learning. This chapter is more or less okay by the way, just seems a bit confusing at first.
5/28/2020 c4 BanalCrepe
Only caught a couple issues this time:

"that past by that moment" - "that passed by that moment"

"this was enough to get out of his trance at least both Louise and her teacher" - "this at least was enough to break the trance of both Louise and her teacher"

"he heard him speak again" - "she heard him speak again"

"cutting her thoughts" - "cutting off her thoughts"
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