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16h c11 Spoonsinthesink
Loved the new chapter! I especially love the interactions between the 11th Doctor and Rey. They're just so cute together and they (all other incarnations of the Doctor that know Rey as well, not just the 11th lol) care for each other so much. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope you stay safe and healthy and a happy new year to you as well!

-Spoons
20h c11 12bored411
ooh possibly jumping before? can't wait to see what else is going on :)
11/28/2020 c10 6savethemadscientist
I always love when there's an update for this story, it's so enjoyable to read. What the Carrionite said about Rey was definitely interesting as well as confusing. I hope to read more soon.
11/20/2020 c10 12bored411
ooh some more foreshadowing. can't wait to read more, though I would like to see rey have a bit more impact on the usual plot. as you said, I feel like she's sort of disappearing sometimes.
11/20/2020 c10 5grapejuice101
Omg I love it! I need more chaps now
10/25/2020 c9 6savethemadscientist
Awesome, another update so soon after the last one. It's cute that Rey is able to joke with the Doctor and he certainly enjoyed it. Makes sense that Rey is familiar with the squareness gun that Jack has, she recognised it from the Library with River Song. I have a feeling that Rey was there with the Doctor when he went to the factories of Villengard. The apples with faces makes me think of Amelia Pond. Not surprising that the Doctor doesn't include Rey when he is insulting humans. The Doctor's reaction to Rose's comment about great looking men is interesting, when he looks at Rey it's as if he wants her opinion on his looks. The reason watching Rose flirt with the Doctor makes Rey uncomfortable is because she has feelings for him, even if she hasn't said anything to him. Lol, Jack is a bit like Captain Kirk. The Doctor's feeling insecure because I think he's worried about Jack getting in between him and Rey. Future plot is exciting. If I had to guess I would think the M part of her name is either Mels or Melody. I'm a little disappointed we didn't find out who Jack dances with. Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/23/2020 c9 12bored411
Future Plot? how exciting! can't wait to see what that's all about and eagerly awaiting more :)
10/21/2020 c8 6savethemadscientist
You might not like how this chapter turned out but I certainly enjoyed reading it. Curious that Rose didn't mention Rey to Jack but then at this point the two of them are not friends. It's sweet that the Doctor was willing to put aside his curiosity for Rey. I do wonder if we'll ever find out what the L and M part of Rey's name stand for. I hope you update soon as I really want to know what happens next.
10/18/2020 c8 Guest
Lovely chapter! cant wait to see what happens in part 2!
10/9/2020 c8 Guest
nice chp. thx
10/10/2020 c8 12bored411
oof, poor rey. can't wait to see how this mess turns out. sounds exciting :)
9/18/2020 c7 6savethemadscientist
Awesome for getting a cat, but be warned, your life will never be the same again. Take if from someone who has a cat. I'm not surprised that Rey decided to protest instead of forget. Also interesting with the gold glow of her eyes, that is new. Looking forward to more.
8/24/2020 c7 12bored411
A cat! How fun :) my tip? Cardboard boxes. Your cat will love them more than my bed or blanket i swear. Great chapter too, by the way! Eager to see more of Rey and her shenanigans with the doctor
8/24/2020 c7 Spoonsinthesink
Ooh love the new chapter! I’m curious about the accident that must have happened to make Amy, Rory, and the Doctor react that way in the beginning section of the story. I can’t wait to hear more about that and Rey’s past.

Tips for how take care of a cat (from someone who, over the last 10 years has owned over 5 cats):
-they can take care of themselves a lot of the time! So don’t worry if they seem to disappear and reappear in random places.
-They’re pretty flexible so they can and will sneak past you when a door is open or a window is open even if it’s just a little crack.
-Make sure to not over feed them! They can eat a lot if given too much food and it’s difficult to get a cat to lose weight.
-If you’re cat starts to go to the bathroom in random places of the house then they feel uncomfortable or threatened and are trying to mark their territory. This happened with one of my cats when we brought in a new rescue.
-If you get another cat it’s also good to have two separate food bowls and two separate litter pans, plus maybe one extra if they don’t get along too well.
-Also make sure to have a water bowl in a place that your cats frequent. For me they tend to come into my room and lay on my bed so I have a big bowl of water at the end of my bed so they have somewhere to drink in a comfortable environment.

I wish you luck with your new cat and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!

-Spoons
8/24/2020 c7 1Saiyanprincess1511
Great story, can't wait to learn about rey' story and more orignal content
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