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9/24/2020 c3 112Cyberchao X
Oh the irony, that Houses Hresvelg and Vestra would create the Church of Seiros.
8/20/2020 c3 12The Incredible Muffin
A great chapter! I understand the rebels' reasoning and why they did what they did. It's hard to rationalize a war with people who seem blessed by the gods, unless you've got someone equally 'blessed' on your own side. Also, I like how you're describing the relationships between the Ten Elites. Can't wait for more!
8/20/2020 c3 2darkblade2814
so we have the first mention to the Apostoles, soon I think will we met Chivalier, and will see his crest as well
12/26/2019 c1 112Cyberchao X
Well this seems interesting.
10/29/2019 c2 12The Incredible Muffin
Something I've quickly come to notice about Wilhelm is that, while he may have good intentions, his actions are incredibly frustrating, to the point that I kind of want to hit him. I don't know if that's what you had planned, but I find it very natural for a person who is used to being in charge to act like that. Also, did you just introduce Seteth, and I'm an idiot for not seeing it? Or is this an ancestor? Seteth and Flayn's story confuses me.

Anyway, love where you're going with this, and I'm particularly eager to see how you expand on the lore of Nemesis and his posse.
10/27/2019 c2 12BlueBlade87
And those parallels are never talked about again because Dimitri must steeped in trauma and no one must help him through it unless their name is Byleth. Anyway yay a chapter and now with have Seteth with us and maybe Flayn soon too, depending on how old she is at the moment. So Kasimira is a Wyvern Rider, that's cool. please keep up the good work I cant wait for the next one.
10/21/2019 c1 12The Incredible Muffin
Okay, this is a cool beginning to the story, especially since I know all the twists in 3H (and makes me even more curious about which route your novelization will take). So, Hubert's ancestor, huh? Really interesting. And while I can understand why Seiros is so angry, her fury shown in the games (and your portrayal here) is kind of unnerving. Great job!
10/21/2019 c1 A Bad Person
Well, this is something I look forward to, the lead up to the final battle between Seiros and Nemesis.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/20/2019 c1 Norgrath
I am looking forward to going down this rabbit hole you're digging.
10/20/2019 c1 G
I would like to sincerely apologize for any quibbles and hate I may have stirred up on AO3, since although I disagreed with some of your choices, I should not have made a huge stink of it or been as much of an ass about it as I was.

In any case, this is looking to be really, really good, helped by the fact that canon has quite a bit of lore and backstory to buttress any attempt at worldbuilding, and I look forward to what comes next.

Quick question, though. Since Maurice and Fraldarius are both with Nemesis, how does this bode for Riegan's status among the 10 Elites? Verdant Wind seems to indicate both he and Fraldarius occupied places of honor amongst the Elites, since they were closest to him in Fodlan's New Dawn, and both had Sacred Weapons, but who knows?
10/20/2019 c1 12BlueBlade87
Kasimira Agnes Vestra, I wonder if she's a magic bomb like Lysithea and Hubert as well or maybe a physical comabt person. Also Wilhelm is much more light hearted then I was thought he was going to be, maybe he puts up a front like Edelgard when he needs to be serious. I cant wait to see more so please keep up the good work.

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