5/10 c1 Noname
I honestly have way more faith in our second in command to take charge adequately when Vert is out but ill let it slide for the ske of the story. I like where this is going. And John is not slick having Agura "track him".
I honestly have way more faith in our second in command to take charge adequately when Vert is out but ill let it slide for the ske of the story. I like where this is going. And John is not slick having Agura "track him".
5/19/2020 c1 Guest
It's a good start, but I find it kinda hard to believe that everyone would just step down and let John lead in the battle zone. He'd never been in one before, and pretty early in the show it was established that if Vert's gone, Agura usually leads the group. Keep up the good work, though!
It's a good start, but I find it kinda hard to believe that everyone would just step down and let John lead in the battle zone. He'd never been in one before, and pretty early in the show it was established that if Vert's gone, Agura usually leads the group. Keep up the good work, though!
3/10/2020 c1 desireepurnellsandi
Best story ever read, by far! So, what's John's color of his Shocksuit and vehicle? And if he's related to the Cortez brothers, shouldn't he have the same hair and eye color?
Best story ever read, by far! So, what's John's color of his Shocksuit and vehicle? And if he's related to the Cortez brothers, shouldn't he have the same hair and eye color?