5/13 c14 Guest
nice chapter plzzzzzzz update ur other story u r mine also plzzzzzzzz i m waiting for the next chapter of u r mine from soo long plzzzzzz update asap ots a request
nice chapter plzzzzzzz update ur other story u r mine also plzzzzzzzz i m waiting for the next chapter of u r mine from soo long plzzzzzz update asap ots a request
5/11 c14 33HIDEnSEEK 06
Didn't expect such ending. I thought Abhijeet will let her go for a while.. they would have a break!
But no :(
Tarika can't commit suicide! How can she? :'(
She has kids.. she has her husband.. :(
How will Abhijeet love with this guilt now? Already the previous guilt was eating him out!
Didn't expect such ending. I thought Abhijeet will let her go for a while.. they would have a break!
But no :(
Tarika can't commit suicide! How can she? :'(
She has kids.. she has her husband.. :(
How will Abhijeet love with this guilt now? Already the previous guilt was eating him out!
4/29 c13 RadZ
Nice pls update it soon it is a very good story
Nice pls update it soon it is a very good story
4/29 c13 Kamikaze Knight
Finally a less painfuo chapter and probably the only chap till now which crept a smile on my face.
Love my abhirika!
Finally a less painfuo chapter and probably the only chap till now which crept a smile on my face.
Love my abhirika!
4/29 c13 HIDEnSEEK 06
When Abhijeet was wiping her tears, maybe then Tarika's lips touched his coat?
Anyways the chapter was beautiful. The emotions were high as always.
Nice chapter.
When Abhijeet was wiping her tears, maybe then Tarika's lips touched his coat?
Anyways the chapter was beautiful. The emotions were high as always.
Nice chapter.
4/11 c12 HIDEnSEEK 06
Damn what the hell Abhijeet did! He was bounded by so snger that he didn't realize what he was saying. He should have at least given Tarika the chance to speak. Then everything would be clear before him.
I know the situation was not good for Abhijeet also.. but still :(
Damn what the hell Abhijeet did! He was bounded by so snger that he didn't realize what he was saying. He should have at least given Tarika the chance to speak. Then everything would be clear before him.
I know the situation was not good for Abhijeet also.. but still :(
3/24 c11 Rubli
sorry meri review adhuri hi post hua ... kabhi kabhi situation bhi life ko miserable kar deta he ... Ha, apne life-partner pe bhorosa karna chahiye par Adi ke bukhar, Tarika di ki jhuth bolna ... yeah sab situation Abhijit sir ko vi pareshani pahuchai... So galti dono ki hi he ... nice chapter...
sorry meri review adhuri hi post hua ... kabhi kabhi situation bhi life ko miserable kar deta he ... Ha, apne life-partner pe bhorosa karna chahiye par Adi ke bukhar, Tarika di ki jhuth bolna ... yeah sab situation Abhijit sir ko vi pareshani pahuchai... So galti dono ki hi he ... nice chapter...
3/23 c11 HIDEnSEEK 06
Now i see from where this doubt came.. Abhijeet should have trusted her... but again in the spur of moment man cannot control themselves after watching something doubtful with their own eyes.. right? So can't solely blame on Abhijeet maybe? Because the way the situation was before him.. he got blinded..
It was more of a misunderstanding...
Nice chapter.
Now i see from where this doubt came.. Abhijeet should have trusted her... but again in the spur of moment man cannot control themselves after watching something doubtful with their own eyes.. right? So can't solely blame on Abhijeet maybe? Because the way the situation was before him.. he got blinded..
It was more of a misunderstanding...
Nice chapter.