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8/14 c30 Kronosbluehairbrush
Sorry I’m a little bit late! I got held up with preparing to return to school and all that stuff. But I’m here now and I have to say this chapter had me feeling a large variety of feelings. I love how Onika never gave up trying to save Green. At one point I almost screamed in frustration when Green was cut off from saying he cared for Onika. However I know it will all be worth it. You are really good at pulling at people’s feelings and I find that amazing. Is Jager that Mando we keep seeing in her dreams? You literally had me about crying in relief when it was revealed that Green was going to be ok. And yes I hope season 2 will help Omega’s character. Like you said, I appreciate the concept of her character but sometimes she just does some stupid things. I look forward to how you plan on dealing with the Boba potentially being Alpha-1. And if that is the case, could the potentially have been a whole Omega unit? Maybe a whole squad of Female clones? That would be interesting. Star Wars has so many possibilities! I am looking forward how this force bond between Green and Onika will pan out. If I understood what I was reading, which I really hope I was, is that she was seeing his memories. If that is the case, could he potentially see hers? It’s definitely an interesting dynamic between them. And so full of possibilities. As usual this was an amazing chapter. Personally I think it’s my favorite so far. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter. And have an amazing day/night!
8/12 c30 304th'sMan
Truly beautiful, did not expect such a turn of events with a force bonding in such a manner. He got by barely, and love to see what happens now that she saw something she never intended. Great job
8/12 c29 1Caster-440
I love this story. However I only really have problem is that Onika's and Green's romance has developed so fast it's given me whiplash. But I'm still hooked on the story and want to see what the future holds for the Mandalorian Jedi :D
8/10 c29 304th'sMan
Ah yes, a cliff hanger of major proportions. Just want I wanted haha. Still fantastic as always, but now I have to wait to see what happens.
8/10 c29 Kronosbluehairbrush
Umbara literally killed me when I realized they were firing on their brothers. I also wanted to tear krell to shreds. Thank you for letting me know about the inhibitor chips. I will start preparing myself for the inevitable order 66 scene. Now that you have mentioned Omega, what is your opinion on her. I find her a little bit annoying. I think it’s her voice gets to me after a while. And some of her actions make me want to just pull my hair out. I love the concept of a female clone though. And she is not all bad. And that she is practically Boba’s sister? Twin? Whatever they are. I’m curious to see if they will meet up. Also if Boba is considered Alpha, if he had grown to maturity. I wonder is he would have been a part of alpha class. I also can’t wait for Green to discover that Onika is of mandalorian descent. No! A cliffhanger! I can’t be complaining though. You haven’t left a lot of cliffhangers so I am grateful for that. Poor Green, Wess, and Hutch, and all the other clones. I hope they get to Green in time. And thank you for wishing me a good day. As usual it was an amazing chapter and I look forward to seeing what happens. I wish you a great day/night!
8/10 c28 304th'sMan
Absolutely fantastic job on the last ten chapters. I’ve been very behind but got to catch up and glad to say I’ve loved how all of this is developing. Can’t wait to see how Aloke does with her trials as well. Keep up the fantastic work!
8/10 c28 Kronosbluehairbrush
Another great chapter! Keep up the good work. The other day when I asked about the connection between the 66th and order 66, I forgot to ask something. Now correct me if I’m wrong, but weren’t the Alpha clone ARC troopers more free thinking than the regular clones? Like they didn’t have the inhibitor chips? I could be completely wrong and what I’m say is noncanon. Or it might not be true in general. But if I am correct, I wonder how that will play out. I also liked the interaction between Rex and Green. I also find it funny that Rex told Green about Anakin and Padme. I liked how it made Green think. Poor Rook… Well poor clones in general. Believe it or not when I was younger, I used to cry when clones died. I feel bad for Onika. She does seem like the person to take things more personal than others would. Anyways it was another amazing chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Have an amazing day!
8/9 c27 Kronosbluehairbrush
I love the teasing between them so much. I love how Green cares so much for her safety and won’t let Onika out of his sights on the battlefield. It was a great chapter. Not going to lie, it’s a little frustrating with knowing that they both like each other but they don’t know that the other likes them. However, it is definitely going to be worth the wait for when they finally get together. I can’t wait for the next chapter and I hope you have a great day!
8/7 c26 Kronosbluehairbrush
I can’t wait for the next chapter and am looking forward to their relationship developments. I am also concerned about the Chancellor. And order 66. Assuming they live to that point. Which I hope they do. I just don’t want Green or the 66th to turn on Onika. Also is there any connection to order 66 and the 66th clones? Anyways I can’t wait to see where Onika’s and Green’s relationship goes. Oh is aloke related to Ashoka?
8/7 c14 Kronosbluehairbrush
I’m looking forward to an explanation of what that was! It sounded so cool.
6/21 c22 Wolfsoldier13
Awesome, can’t wait to read next chapter.
5/7 c21 flooded
Good shit
5/6 c21 sidharthnair02
New chapter is beautiful. The level of angst makes the whole thing better
5/2 c20 Wolfsoldier13
Poor Green. Awesome job on it! Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
4/14 c18 Guest
Thanks for another great chapter Queen! I love all your characters so much.
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