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10/16/2020 c3 40Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
Damn. This got pretty hot. Like pushing your rating hot. I don't complain.

About your AN, I don’t think you are really wrong. That guy got something for yanderes. That or he’s a complete numbskull when it comes to women. It’s nearly insulting.

I was kinda foreseeing that you would have made the twins visit Dan and Ran. That was fun if about the chats that Ichika had with Dan. I liked how the guy was commenting on the fact of how Dan thought while still fighting in the Infinite Stratos game. I heard that they had that game. It’s what it is.

Still, those remarks. I had to laugh on the stress reliever. That can be said about Ichika and Madoka as well. As for the tired twins, that was just something. About that whole tournament, you poured some more thoughts in that regard. About that flashback, that was with Tabane. I didn’t expect her to call Ichika and admit it.

She is still growing but Ichika you had to take her up on that offer. I think that she wouldn’t have minded one bit. It looks like Houki gave her a call. I don’t think that’s the last of the flashback. About the stuff with Rin, visiting by. Nice spin on the canon stuff. Again, she is closer to Madoka than she is to Ichika so it doesn’t hurt if they close the gap.

About Maya, she is really getting teased by the students. You can nearly imagine her fretting and pouting. Too cute to even think about it. It was great on how Ichika saved her. He can be really innocent at some regards.

About the stuff with Charles and Laura, that was a nice find. Instead of hating Ichika’s guts, the silverette refers to him as doctor. And they got some history. That was a great find. That was fun. With Charles, that was one shock indeed. Ichika really figured that out fast. We can only wonder how it goes from here.

Chifuyu’s dominatrix nature came into play now. That was funny. And well, with the stuff here, that guy should consider a job as comedian. I am laughing my ass off. With Ichika, that was even better and his comments. About the stuff he said, rule 63 fics of Infinite Stratos have been made. I haven’t found a great one yet.

About the stuff with Maya, that kiss. That guy got fucking lucky. It did happen in canon where he did end up on top of her and he kissed her while squeezing her butt. The reactions were fantastic. You are really going after making this happening. And I mean when I said that I found it kinda smutty. Chifuyu did a good job not murdering her.
That might just work out fine for Ichika where he is looking. About the stuff with the girls. Laura might be better for them. Now that I am reading this. You went on her faster. Not that it’s bad. And well, with Ichika. I do enjoy how he is just looking at Maya. He won’t be too wrong about the tits but why is he comparing the tits of his love interest with his sister?

With Chifuyu and her inner monologue, that is one thing in which we have done differently. Not spoiling anything on that regard. But that is one thing of character development. On how Ichika had grown and where she isn’t around as Ice Queen. It’s kinda weird that she is the one that is left behind despite being the oldest.

With Maya, I think that Chifuyu did approve but I would enjoy watching that. Damn, now I think of it. I should have done it as well. With Charles, we haven’t seen the end of that. By a long shot. I wonder how that will go.
Saluut.
10/15/2020 c2 Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
Interesting pick to make Madoka a friend of Rin while Ichika can barely remember her. It would make more sense that she isn't interested in Ichika or without a crush on him. Nice find.

The title makes sense when you think about it.

With Chifuyu, she really is one Ice Queen. Amped her up by a bit? Just wondering. Besides that, you really don't like Houki now do you? She still is holding on that while I do wonder where you got those images from. But I can see why Ichika would be against dating her. That was rough. But the truth will set you free'

Question I have. Why doesn't Ichika see Tabane as dating material? If he was looking for love?

With Maya, as I mentioned before. I am seeing this single pairing for the first time. She was in harem fics before but now this. Nice. Although Ichika should try to reign in his sisters before they become Maya's sisters in law. They really were bullying her.

Chifuyu can't deal with romance. That was hilarious how she reacted and bored down on the stuff. Madoka, on the other hand, was full in romance style. Real good.
Good luck with the Next bits.
Saluut.
10/14/2020 c1 Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
When you write something similar, you like to see what the others do. You really wrapped quite a few episodes all in one setting of this fic. Not that I am complaining, just noticing. The stuff here is good although it's the firs time that I hear the name Balanced and Overpowered in the same line.

This was fun to read. Ichika is quite sassy although that might be a nice change. I like how this went. You really invested in those characters and the Infinite Stratos. I liked that. Some bits from Unlimited Bahamut Chronicles. Should check that out.

With the harem, I do not think that is going to happen. I like how you worked those girls over but it might ruin it. Maya is one good single lover though.

Either way, there was a lot of enjoyment for me here. Might get some inspiration for my own stuff. Some ideas.
Saluut.
9/30/2020 c3 Guest
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
9/28/2020 c3 LL
This is an amazing story mate. Has it’s own originality to it so it Differentiate from others.
8/31/2020 c3 Cobalt Conrad
I don't want to add criticism about not having incest here, but in fact I found it good to not have one. I can remeber To-Love Ru not having one, but people thought they do. I really wonder, because we need a little bit lewds in the Orimura clan.

But I'm quiet tired of making long reviews so I will leave it here. I am goin to watch this closer than ever. I will watch this grow into a 100k words fanfic.
8/6/2020 c3 Kelvin Wong Jun Sheng
It is a good story, pls continue. I love the storyline where it will goes. From what I see, I think the story can have more climax scene.
6/3/2020 c3 6MM007
I like what I'm seeing here. A competent and less ignorant Ichika, a Madoka to serve as his foil, more natural development...yep! Favorited.
4/4/2020 c3 4Ancient Sith Tulak Hord
It's quite funny to see Ichika and Yamada interactions with each other. Madoka being a prankster is amusing.
2/2/2020 c2 Guest
Please update because I've been waiting for this for months and it took you a couple days to write two chapters along with your other stories so please start updating suspense is killing me on this in the other stories!
11/17/2019 c2 18Viperhat
No clue why, but i love reading Houki get verbally vaporised by your Ichika here. XD I think it's because i like watching someones shitty behaviour get called out... Ironic, since i myself am a massive asshole but that is neither here or there. It slightly perturbs me that the anime (as far as i remember) never really addressed that when it could have been a foundation for some real Houki development. It probably would have helped warm people up to her too. Though i hope she doesn't get over this quickly in this story. A bit of mental back and forth would do wonders and give you time to flesh her out a little and come to terms with both the new Ichika but also her own perceived worldview.

I would criticise the personality flip with Cecilia, but you did address it. Plus the show doesn't even give it a second thought... fucking harem anime ammirite? Overall, you did a better job with it by merely acknowledging its oddness.

Yo, i don't think i can actually name a story where Ichika Orimura/ Maya Yamada was the main pairing. So even if it doesn't go harem mode with whoever you end up going with at least we still get the Maya romance. Though i'll still stick with my original stance. XD But i'll say that the two small interactions between those two are highly amusing to watch.

-Viperhat
11/14/2019 c2 6Wic W. Athor
I do have some problems with your story, still gonna continue reading it but just want to get this stuff off my chest. I feel like Ichika is too condescending even in a serious situation. He feels like a smart-ass and it feels like he doesn’t give any respect to anyone he normally interacts with (excluding a few characters).

A problem that you could improve upon is your battle scenes. I just feel like you tell us how long it goes for but you don’t add any substance to the fight to make it feel long or make the audience interested.
11/13/2019 c1 18Viperhat
Yo, this is actually rather intriguing in its perceived simplicity. Just 'IS' with a good Madoka and strong siblings. Not the most unique concept in the world, but it was written well and the new personalities are more than entertaining enough. Plus, Uniqueness isn't all that important in the grand scheme of things.

To shorten my rambling down to a single sentence: I very much enjoyed this and am excited for the next instalment. XD

Yeah, Ichika got a real boning with Byakushiki. The anime didn't give him much of a break if any at all either. Though it could have been fun to have the more incompetent or unobservant pilots in the academy look down on him for having such a defective IS (disregarding the fact that Chifuyu almost won the MG with it). Could have made for a neat underdog element. Though Golden Dragon Monarch was pretty fun to imagine so kudos for making an OP IS replacement fun i suppose.

As for Yamato-no-Orochi... Might i suggest a simple Broadsword simply for the style and functionality of it's design?

Do not worry, i shall not beg for Houki or anyone from the first three. Though pairing wise: Yeah, Maya is a cool choice. But i wouldn't mind seeing a harem i suppose. Though i'd like to see Yamada and Tatenashi if you went with that route. Simply since those two are my favourite characters and the potential for a fun dynamic between the two of them and Ichika is my main selling point. Having The blunt and Frank Ichika, the playful and devious nature of Tatenashi all wrapped up with the adorable and shyness of Maya Yamada. To me that spells entertaining at the very least. XD

Eitherway, i'll quit burbling on and sign out for now. But i'll keep an eye on this story, it looks to be an entertaining endeavour.

-Viperhat
11/6/2019 c1 Zahndrekh
pity there is no Ichika x Madoka, I like this kind of pairing.
The Best Imouto still need more love from their oniichans/The Best Little Sisters need more love from their Big Brothers after all. :D

but you are the author you are free to do what you want.

even for the harem, a simple pairing is good too. I vote for Maya or Charlotte.

interesting to see that you have changed his IS. I can't wait to see Ichika in action!

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