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13h c28 Guest
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17h c28 Lifeisaloha
thank you for the update, I’ve been waiting all year for itI love this story so much, thank you for all of your time
11/9/2020 c27 Guest
I love your story!
Your characters are really relatable and it is really exciting to read.
I hope to see more in the future.
9/13/2020 c27 Mister LaGuardia
I'm hoping that they play it; if they can get Loreon legitimized and fast talk Mace and Olenna, they might be able to tie the Reach to themplay the "Shireen probably won't have children" card, but subtly.
9/10/2020 c1 9GoldenGail3
I like Ross.
9/9/2020 c27 Guest
whoa
8/22/2020 c26 Jeyne
Your fanfiction is one of the best I've ever read!
Ross is an very interesting character, with all her flaws.
I was able to understand the actions of every characters and they're feelings.
I hope you keep on writing.
7/12/2020 c25 Zyruss Villarreal
Se if you do rewrite chapter 24 to where loren is taken by renly you can keep chapter 25 more or less the same and let the lords argue on who to join renly or stannis but in reality there both working for loren and the northern lord dont know this since a raven from high garden would take time to reach riverrun
7/12/2020 c24 Zyruss Villarreal
I feel you should rewrite this chapter having renly take Loren with him after robert died instead of him going to stannis like I love me some stannis. But having Loren going with renly would been a better idea hell renly could have declared loren king promising the tyrells that they'll get a royal marriage of loren and margaery since there closer in age then her and renly and plus the fact he'll never be able to get her pregnant and then have loren make renly his hand and then renly can be with lores all he want cause no one can do anything about who renly sleep with if he's hand. And then have stannis who knows that the 3 children from Cersei aren't robert kids start spreading the news that loren the true heir to the iron throne tying stannis into the story. And if you haven't written any more loren chapters yet you can fix the chapters. Cause if renly and stannis are on the same page it's better for the realm.
7/12/2020 c23 Zyruss Villarreal
Why dose every fanfic writer have to kill ned like there no god damn reason to kill ned the war of the 5 kings would kick off anyways sure Joffrey king but something most people forget is hes not king till hes 16 so really Cersei his regent. you even state it in the throne room scene she his when he orders his execution instead of telling him dont do it she should right away told the gold clones holding ned to send him to his cell to be prepared to be sent to the wall by sea or put him in a better cell yo use him as a hostage. Also I see Cersei realized M not really Roose Bolton kid.
7/10/2020 c26 Guest
Nice work.

I hope we get a Giana POV as well.
7/10/2020 c9 Zyruss Villarreal
I'm barley on chapter nine it's a great story but how has no one in the 7 kingdoms realized this kid dad is jamie the golden lion Lannister. Like hell even the kid kinda suspects that jamie is his possible father. You know what I take it back if anyone was to know for sure that jamie was this kids dad was areys old kings guard since they all knew jamie was always around ross. Hell I bet if we got a barrastin chapter after the kid was born he probably would have thought ya that Jamie's kid but I won't snitch cause I actually like jamie. (Could you please reply back cause the fact no one knows this bugs me) also I'm surprised tywin didn't make his other kid queen like he could used the whole well you gave my daughter a basterd so you should marry her out of your honor hell I bet he robert probably would have actually liked her more then Cersei.
7/7/2020 c26 MomiWolfie
almost forget about Theon.

I'll call him grandfather line is LOL!
7/7/2020 c26 5mickeiblue
quick question, how is rosennis meant to be pronounced?

I'm curious to know how the small changes will change big things, like Jaime not being released and losing a hand, not having Cat being with Renly 'if/when' he dies, will Ros being around stop the Tyrell's joining the Lannister's, what will Brienne's role be, and I'm excited about Loreon, a true Baratheon and Lannister.
6/21/2020 c25 Mister LaGuardia
Nice to see Ross being the voice of reason; of course Catelyn will probably see it as her withholding power and glory from her son.
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