7/30 c1 Anon
Your grammar throughout is bad ("flu" instead of "flew"? Really?) and there's nothing clever, interesting or subtle about this blatant wish fulfillment at all. Plus why would Baron Greenback apologize to anyone for being manipulative? He's evil. You need to work on spelling and grammar, understanding character motivations and maybe reign in your ego considering you somehow thought this was better than the original episode's ending.
Your grammar throughout is bad ("flu" instead of "flew"? Really?) and there's nothing clever, interesting or subtle about this blatant wish fulfillment at all. Plus why would Baron Greenback apologize to anyone for being manipulative? He's evil. You need to work on spelling and grammar, understanding character motivations and maybe reign in your ego considering you somehow thought this was better than the original episode's ending.