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1/11 c1 6brasheril-holmestalentsmaster
Fuck, this is too good.

How can it not have a mountain of reviews?

Your writing is topnotch.
Description
Narrative
Plot and Uniqueness
Pacing
Dialogue and Interaction
Worldbuilding and Background
Depth and Backstory
Development and growth
Characterization
Structurization and grammar, ortography and punctuation.
All of those, the things which make up a story, you excelled in here.

You actually brought a tear to my eye with this work. It's heartfelt, wholesome and heartwarming, and I could feel all of that deep.

Beyond words here.

Hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: perhaps try posting your story or stories on AO3 too? You might get better feedback there.

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