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1/26/2020 c1 41Generation's Incarnation
How is this before “Darkside of the Mouse”? But we’re all anticipating on how Crumhorn will return to Earth with the army of Fly People.
12/6/2019 c1 brave kid
once again great dm story
12/6/2019 c1 435Irhaboggles
Ooooh, nice work with this one! The line that stuck out to me most was honestly the one where Dawn says “he didn’t come home” only for Snuggles to ask whether she means DM or her dad and she replies with “does it matter?” IDK, I just thought that was really chilling and good, a great way at conveying her emotions, especially as they pertain to 2 out of 3 of the most important guys in her life (Snuggles being the 3rd, of course). IDK, I just really liked that subtle comparison, and the way you worded it.

Also, I did think it was funny watching Snuggles and Dawn briefly bicker about phone usages and bills. It was just a more lighthearted moment and once again shows how you portray Snuggles in relation to Dawn: something of a second father/caretaker, since Augustus is rarely around. It was cute seeing him call her brave, and then have him keep an eye out for DM or Augustus just because Dawn would worry otherwise. They are a very sweet duo. Great work on this!

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