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6/16 c23 SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta
Just in time for Dread.
I know you explained why you decided to do it, but having the 2 of them "share" each other is still weird.
4/6 c19 SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta
I've loved the story so far, but I had to leave a review here about how weird it is for Samus to be so open about sex. She's 13 years old, a child, and has only ever met one other of her kind in the past 10 years. It feels incredibly awkward and strange.
9/28/2020 c4 5SmashBrosOdyssey
Uh oh, those nefarious aliens are at it again, great ying and yang between the Chozos too. Sylux's new friends are scheming, whereas the Chozo are pure of heart. Also, I'm totally down with Arnie! He's such a pure hearted young man, and it fills me with dread to see what atrocities warp him into Sylux. Good stuff! That's all for a bit, but I'll be back to pick this up!
9/28/2020 c3 SmashBrosOdyssey
I LOVE OLDBIRD! HE'S LIKE YODA BUT NOT A DICK! Also thought it was a very nice twist on the "Find me wherever you are" thing that you usually get when parents die or something. I also like how you weave words when it comes to Zebes. Just describing a planet as "a great machine" gives it a unique yet unsettling vibe. Can't wait to read more.
9/28/2020 c2 SmashBrosOdyssey
I like how Sylux and Samus had very similar run ins with alien life, yet knowing that their moral paths would take such divergent path (at least, in the Metroid canon as I understand it) Again, this will be good! Looking forward to reading more!
9/28/2020 c1 SmashBrosOdyssey
I like the world building we've got going on here. Concise, and easy to follow, and with The Aran family mixed in. I get a very Titan AE vibe from this, and that's one of my favorite movies. Also ooooh a Sylux prequel? That's gonna be good!
6/27/2020 c13 1Blabacon
I just finished reading through the entire story and it's amazing. I can't wait to read more. :)
6/22/2020 c13 1SomeWarlock
So I guess i'll be the first to review your story. I would just like to say that your writing was very well done. As a metroid fan, Sylux had always been a blank slate that could be expanded upon. And knowing that in the future, he has hatred for the federation AND Samus, leaves some intrigue to why Arne would turn out like that and taking the name.

I hope you don't leave this story as it was extremely well done so far.

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