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2/16 c3 16WingedWolf101
I loved this chapter! Great with the emotions a d everyone's interaction. I especially loved Antauri's discussion with Chiro. Really made me laugh and gush! Good job!
1/15 c2 Anthrowolf20
Hehehe naughty clueless Otto, not understanding you look but don't touch lol
1/12 c2 WingedWolf101
Pff hah! Well done, love the interactions, very smooth and seems almost canon (or better). I enjoyed Sprx's role in this so far Also looking forward to big reaction to Jinmay's upgrades!
1/12 c2 228Laid-Back Brit
Just as wonderful as the first chapter! Everyone is in-character, their interactions with each other was humourous as always and there was even plenty of moving moments!

Looking forward to finding out Chiro’s reaction to Jinmay’s upgrades appearance...

...and what Sprx has planned for the pair of them!
1/9 c1 16WingedWolf101
Very good, a decent presentation. I enjoyed the vivid narrations with Jinmay, good to remind everyone she may be a robot but she still posseses feelings.

Good job, can't wait to read ch.2.
1/9 c1 228Laid-Back Brit
Wow! What a start to this beautifully-written intriguing fic!

It succeeded to push all the right buttons! So much well-written detail and the ability to make you wonder where all this is leading to! And the way you’ve written Jinmay is top-notch; reminding us that she is in fact a robot - yet giving her so many emotions to the point where she behaves human, indicating that - as you’ve pointed out, she is certainly not like most robots... Plus, the sweet way she described how she feels around Chiro, that’s enough to make anyone go ‘Awww!’

Looking forward to seeing what you have in store next! Keep up the awesome work!

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