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5/25/2020 c5 1THGHPTVD.2
"... Mr Broody Eyebrows in the corner ..." I died. But then I lived because I had to finish the chapter. I think all Throne of Glass fans love a character that can throw insults. Also: "Lin-lin". I think we all have a nickname that death threats are thrown about because of, but I pity Aelin. (Thanks for your review, btw) Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing
5/6/2020 c3 31rattle1the1stars
Yeah, people should just stop suffocating girls with untealistic expectations and let them be who they wanna be. Nice job so far.
5/5/2020 c4 1THGHPTVD.2
Another amazing chapter! I love the way Lorcan is protective over Elide, but she's having none of it. Lorcan snarled at Aedion, but Elide growled back at him! I love it! I don't think the switching POVs is too much. I think it's a nice amount for each character. And as for insecurity, I think we all are to some degree, don't worry about it. You're amazing. Don't ever doubt that.
I can't wait to see how Ansel interacts with the cripple, the noblewoman, the Prince and the "two immortal territorial bastards". In fact, I can't wait to see her around Aelin. I'm also looking forward to their reunion. Maybe Rowan is gonna figuratively kill Aelin for leaving without him, but then kill her again with kindness? I don't know. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter. Good luck writing it, and good luck with life in general. Thank you for writing.
5/4/2020 c4 9CrescentFullMoon
So good! Need Aelin and Rowan reunion. Can’t wait for more.
5/2/2020 c3 CrescentFullMoon
Love this story it is so interesting and very well written. Cannot wait to read more!
4/12/2020 c3 nonoaaa
Hi! I love this story, but I’m really confused as to when in the series this takes place. I also think you could split up paragraphs a little bit, because it’s difficult to read. Other than that, I love the idea this story has and I’m excited to see where it goes in the future :)
4/6/2020 c3 Lily
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to keep reading your story!
3/13/2020 c1 1THGHPTVD.2
By the way, I loved the chapter. Thank you for writing.
3/13/2020 c3 THGHPTVD.2
Thank you so much! I love how protective Fenrys is over Aelin, and the same with Lorcan and Elide. In Lorcan's own way, he's showing affection, even if he's not that good at it. And of course he'd never admit it, because his ego. I love Aelin's grand entrances, and her attitude. She always did love being independent. I can't wait to hear more about Nehemia, and how she'll interact with the Fae. (I read the Author's Notes! I hope you get better soon. You are an extraordinary writer. Please believe in yourself. I know it can be hard sometimes, but you will make it. Something I constantly see on Pinterest and the like is if you're having trouble writing a scene/chapter, then write out the dialogue first, and bare minimal actions e.g "You'll have to catch me first, hunny" [Hero escapes death with flair] "I'll get you yet, don't you worry". Don't apologise for getting stressed and having a life. There are things you apologise for and things you don't. Don't apologise for being you. We all get stressed from time to time. It's OK. (and we ALL love possessive Lorcan, really))
3/10/2020 c3 1kaelster18
A. I love how you incorporated Aelin's personality into her enterence to court.
2/27/2020 c2 1THGHPTVD.2
I. LOVE. THIS. CHAPTER. TOO. You capture the essence of the characters so well, and as a writer myself, I understand how hard that can be. At least it is for me. I like the way you change perspectives, and you tell us exactly ho is thinking what. Sometimes I found that a little hard to follow in Sarah's books. yOu have talent. Use it. (And please for the love of the gods, add another chapter)

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