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1/1 c2 17Ice Maiden Olivier
AHH edgey boy, very few can accurately portray your angst and awesomeness but you dear author have managed it :) eager for the next chapter
8/14/2020 c1 GuestFFM
john phoenix depressing
12/27/2019 c1 37ApolloBlackwood
It's for moments like these that I truly truly love the ace attorney fandom -
reading your story reminded me how MUCH I loved 1-4 and how helpless I felt during that trial during my playthrough (I was scared of Manfred); and since you wrote it from Edgeworth's perspective it adds a new lawyer of depth that touches my soul -
Thank you for your story, and thank you for reminding me how much I love the original trilogy ;.;

(One thing with what I sometimes struggle during my own stories is keeping the tense consistent; you know, jumping between present and past n' stuff. You had one or two sentences where you changed into the present [for me it's usually the other way round haha ...] despite overall writing in past tense so uh, that on a sidenote, cause I noticed)

Another thing, Edgeworth notices the joy in Von Karma's eyes is a detail that makes me squeal. Is very good. Especially since I know the reason behind it :)))))

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