11/4/2020 c1 5Shiploverforever
so the next chapter will be up but I am under a lot of stress right now so it might be a few days but it will be up very very soon and so will my new book I hope you all will add last Take a look at it it will be a lot of fun and amazing characters and of course characters you all know so I hope you all are doing well night
so the next chapter will be up but I am under a lot of stress right now so it might be a few days but it will be up very very soon and so will my new book I hope you all will add last Take a look at it it will be a lot of fun and amazing characters and of course characters you all know so I hope you all are doing well night
11/2/2020 c6 Shiploverforever
Hi so everyone there is a new part coming but a friend and I are having problems with the site the parts are not posting so it might be a few days I am sorry but just know it was meant for the 3
Hi so everyone there is a new part coming but a friend and I are having problems with the site the parts are not posting so it might be a few days I am sorry but just know it was meant for the 3
10/20/2020 c3 4AnonymousvWriter
Well, so far so good, my friend. I especially love the brief interaction between Bunga and Ushari. I always found their bumping into each other funny on the show (until Ushari turns evil, that is) and yours is every bit as funny. Keep up the good work )
Well, so far so good, my friend. I especially love the brief interaction between Bunga and Ushari. I always found their bumping into each other funny on the show (until Ushari turns evil, that is) and yours is every bit as funny. Keep up the good work )
4/20/2020 c3 1aw4977273
Concept: Good. Execution: Passable. If you added speech marks, proper punctuation and tried to lose the script format, the SHOUTY CAPS for characters and directions as well as tried to be more descriptive, it would be better.
Concept: Good. Execution: Passable. If you added speech marks, proper punctuation and tried to lose the script format, the SHOUTY CAPS for characters and directions as well as tried to be more descriptive, it would be better.
1/3/2020 c1 VariaLioness
Take your time, I think I'll be pretty great
Take your time, I think I'll be pretty great