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9/25/2020 c12 Arika Koski
Do make Balto World War 2 please!

I also want to see some Kodi X Dusty moments.
4/18/2020 c12 anniversary2025
Good evening
Dear Sir or Madam, I hope I don't bother you right now. Today I read your final chapter of Fanfiction story and I'm sorry, what I've told you in my review. Its a nice Fanfiction story.
I would be glad, if you make a Fanfiction story based on your idea - Wings of Change.
But if you could, make the story in Great Britain during Second World War.
If you want to send me your answer, send it on my email:
4/5/2020 c10 Arika Koski
Are your considering Aniu as a male?
3/22/2020 c8 Arika Koski
Quick question? Is this fanfic rated T because there's violence and gore and cussing? If this fanfic was a film would it be rated PG-13?
2/20/2020 c3 Arika Koski
What makes you think that Muk and Luk have autism?
2/9/2020 c2 diesel weasel
How's it going! this is pretty interesting take on Balto. Sorry I'm not responding on my account, I haven't been active for some time now, but you left a comment on my humanized Balto story.

Anyways, I like all of the descriptions you are including! it makes the story very easy to visualize. I'm not sure how serious you are about writing but here are some things that I as a reader and writer have noticed.

Smaller paragraphs are your friend, in essays a paragraph is about 5-7 sentences. but when the literature is more for pleasure and entertainment smaller paragraphs are easier to read (in my experience mind)

One last note, be sure to have fun writing! it is fun for the readers to be able to visualize how this Balto/WW1 story looks like, but be sure to take your writing about actions the characters have in the world and the dialog between characters. You have done a great job at setting up the scene, but half the fun of stories are characters dynamics with other characters (something I struggle with myself)

I cannot wait for the next chapter!
2/10/2020 c1 anniversary2025
Good evening
Dear Sir or Madam, I hope I don't bother you right now. Today I read your Fanfiction story and I don't think it's completely good. Nothing against your idea, Balto can be human. But you can't describe him as half German and half English man in german army. And you cant use Nome in your story as a small fiction French town occupied by the germans. Especially not in 2020, because in five years it will be the centenary of serum run to Nome.
Furthermore, you can't set the opening scene in Lüneburg, in Germany, because in Lüneburg on 23 May 1945 Reichsführer SS Heinrich Himmler commited suicide by biting into a potassium cyanide capsule.
You could describe Balto to be half American and half Norwegian, who served in US Army, fight in Normandy, Netherlands and Bulge, but was wounded and now hes in Nome and set the story in Nome 1945 during the final stage of World War two.
Nothing against your idea. I don't want to offend you, you're definitely very talented. But if I would be on your place I stick to the version I wrote to you. If you want to send me your answer, send it on my email.

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