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8/1 c17 bluerainspirit
Hi! How are you? *waves lightly*

First of all, I'm really deeply sorry for being so late! I meant to read this chapter and then leaving a review immediately, but then I got caught up by the studies for my exams and then I went on vacation... honestly, I may have forgotten about it a little bit. So, my deepest sincere apologies.

Secondly, this chapter is absolutely perfect! I'm not going to say that this is my favorite because I loved the ones before too, and I know that the next ones will be very beautiful and interesting. But this one gave me so many emotions!
The first scene is so reassuring, while I was reading it I felt the same feeling of calmness and reassurance that Nat felt. Or at least the one that Bartimeaus tried to give him. I also loved how Bartimeaus was immediately able to pick up on Nathaniel's emotional state and do something about it. Seriously, the bond between these two is something special that you can't unseen; even better, you always feel it trespassing in every scene.

The moment when Nat e Bart came home made me laugh. Is it me or is Bart jealous? I mean, I know that his pride makes him jealous of other spirits and I noticed, in the chapter before, that he was kinda jealous of Shubit and his "relationship" with Nat, but I love seeing it again here. Like, it kinda confirmed it. Also, the attention and protectiveness that Bart had shown to Nat during the conversation with Adamastor were so beautiful! I love these little hints between the two of them.
Even if, I have to say, the conversation between Bart and Shubit outside Nat's house wins it all! Especially Bartimeaus reactions, when Shubit says that he likes Nat. I will love to see how Shubit will act next, considering this. Maybe he will even do things to make Bart (more) jealous on purpose? Anyway, I'm very curious about this part.

As for the last scene, it was amazing. I thought that I couldn't love a scene more than the one at the beginning of this chapter, and yet the scene on the roof moved me a lot. First of all, in both the moments when you described Nathaniel laughing, I could imagine him so well that it almost hurts. After everything he went through as a child, and later on, it's just so beautiful, seeing him so happy. Or just the chance that he can be happy (especially considering how his story ended, something that I know I will never recover from).
And the interaction between Nathaniel and Bartimeaus was just so beautiful and emotional here. Even without looking at it from a romantic perspective, it was such a magical, beautiful, happy moment, that it made me melts with emotions. And if you think about it romantically, like the reaction that Bart had when Nat grabbed his hand... I can't even describe it. I dunno, I like self-combust? Well, you can get the point, I suppose.

Anyway, my compliments for this chapter, which are definitely deserved; and sorry again for my delay.

P.S.: Just wanted to say that English is not my first language, even if I'm kinda... capable? with it, sometimes I still make mistakes or maybe I write in a strange way, so my apologies for this too! And have a good day/evening
7/12 c17 3CaffeinatedFlower
Awe:') This is just so nice. It's also so them. Amazing job! You have that knack for making these two progress in their relationship without messing up the characters.

The hand holding and tracing of stars was omfg I almost started squealing like a teenage girl again
4/22 c16 bluerainspirit
They finally talk! I loved that moment so much, every single situation where two characters finally talk with each other is so important for me. Glad to see this happen here, if there are two characters who need to sit down and talk, those are definitely Bartimeaus and Nathaniel.
There are a lot of things that need to be said, but it's a start and I found it beautiful.
When Bartimeaus said "and I forgive you" and Nathaniel do you? I felt so emotional!
Forgiving is such an important thing and I believe it always allows the relationship to get better.
Piper was amazing in this chapter, I love her so much and I hope things are only getting better for her. I love her relationship with Ezekiel and reading about it and how everyone in her team loves and respects her. I really hope that she will get more of this, she deserves it.
Mr. Button and Bertha are so adorable!
I also find Shubit very interesting, I like his characters and, this may be a wrong impression, but I had a feeling that he has a lot of interest in Nathaniel (?). Which makes sense because no magicians would treat a spirit like he's doing, but I have a feeling there's something more? I don't mean it in a romantic way, just something more. Even if is funny to see Bartimeaus acting kinda jealous about it, I would like to see this part developed more too. How this collaboration between Shubit and Nathaniel will go and how Bartimeaus will react to it...

Anyway, beautiful chapter as usual!
Can't way to read more!
Have a good day and take care.
3/28 c15 CaffeinatedFlower
Hahah Bartimaeus and Nathaniel being the most ridiculous duo according to Kitty was just so funny to read because you had me picturing it perfectly, the three of them in the kitchen and the silliness and Kitty's whole reaction. Awww those two just really want the other to like them at this point and it's all so sweet and my fangirl is very happy in this slow burn sizzly fic lol. I love the plot and the characters are true to the original, it makes this story such a gem to the fandom, honestly. Also, you really pull us in with all your different scenes and paint the picture so vividly of what's happening in the story, like Kitty and Bart at the Rotten Bones pub lol! And North America with Piper and her trying to complete this mission while being intimidated by the President and his fiance. The pacing is amazing and I love how you block the pov's! Very smooth story and so happy you are writing!
3/7 c14 2InsomniacDog
I am reading! I eagerly wait new uploads from you, and so does my friend (she does not have a fanfic account but she loves this)! Thank you so much for writing this story. I think you write excelently and I am hooked on this fanfic. I don't know how to express to you how grateful I am that someone is active on this fandom. I think your story really does justice to the original. I started reading for the Bartimaeus/Nathaniel relationship but stayed for the plot (but I'm also waiting for their relationship to develop). Anyways, thank you so much for this. We'll be waiting for the next chapter!
11/5/2020 c10 Ecatis
THIS IS INSANELY GOOD. I love this fic SO MUCH. Great job!
11/5/2020 c10 InsomniacDog
I'm loving this fanfic. It is great to see someone still giving love to my favourite series of books. Will you continue uploading? Thanks!
10/3/2020 c10 2arhangle
Hey this is great; havrnt visited this fandom in awhile and am happy yours is the one i found. Lookign forward to the next chapter!
7/1/2020 c9 3CaffeinatedFlower
The plot is coming together nicely
6/27/2020 c8 CaffeinatedFlower
Finally read it and it’s honestly been so great! I loved the transitions from past to future and it flowed really well. And I didn’t realize the hybrids were those things from the third book so when that clicked I was like “Ohhhhh!” And I really do like Pipers arc and can’t wait to see her become a leader (or even fail) she’s become quite an interesting character and I could feel her exhaustion and stress jut from reading it. Also, you did a really great job adding new characters to replace the giver emend from the third book. I liked the part when the wind blew Ronald Kingston’s coat and Piper and him were standing with their demons near the hybrid, painted quite a picture. Thank you for your amazing work!
5/16/2020 c7 CaffeinatedFlower
I was curious about how Bart and Nat would be interacting with each other and I have to say, you don't disappoint! You pulled off the Bart Nat relationship but also acknowledged how their relationship evolved and is moving forward. Also love the light hearted fun ending hehe XD They're both so irritable and feisty I love it tehe
4/16/2020 c4 7NicetyL
I wish I could comment inline XD there are so many lines that made me laugh. I love how you'ret aking your time exploring this. It isn't- "he's awake, now lets move on with the story." It's nice seeing all these moments
4/16/2020 c3 NicetyL
I love the detail and thought put into this!
4/16/2020 c1 NicetyL
he's aliveee
4/13/2020 c6 3CaffeinatedFlower
Wow, this is like an extension of the Bartimaeus series. You're really good at showing not telling and turning your words to life! I liked Kitty as a character, but I'd usually be like common get to the other parts, but the Kitty part here is really interesting and I like that you make her fight against a resistance this time- also looking forward to more Bart and Nat xD xD xD
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