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2/21/2020 c1 4The Pairing Guy
Aw, Kyon and Haruhi are so sweet together in this one. Haruhi feeling hurt over Kyon being "late", Kyon getting upset at the position of faithful laborer being taken away from him, Haruhi trying to reconcile by letting him be the "test pilot", Kyon feeling jealous when she praises Koizumi's save of the saucer and humiliated at her laughter when he goes down backwards, Haruhi checking him for injuries, the two of them riding together at Kyon's accidental (or subconsciously deliberate?) suggestion, Kyon being entranced by her zest for the adventure, their shared laughter at the crash, Kyon carrying her back up the hill... It all made me wish that they would kiss at the end, even though that would be out of character even if the others weren't present. That same poignant romantic tension is what makes me enjoy the source material so much.

If I have any major complaint, it's that after all the buildup I'd have liked to see more of the rest of the SOS Brigade riding the saucer, Nagato especially. I realize that might be somewhat difficult while sticking to Kyon's perspective, but if Nagato's turn comes last that would mean she'd go down with Kyon on her second ride, yes? I enjoyed the buildup anyway, though. A fun and romantic little fic.
2/3/2020 c1 5Raganakin
Your stories have made me want to read the Light Novels. I hope that in the future you can continue writing about Haruhi and his brigade. I will be supporting you!

While my favorite character is Kyon, obviously, I must say that you don't put aside the other characters. Not only here, but also in the other stories, that's something I like.

Well, that's it for now, I'll be attentive to your future projects in this series (if you continue)
1/26/2020 c1 fencer29
Classic Haruhi. Has she been watching old American comedy movies again (specifically National Lampoon's Christmas Vacation)?

And did Kyon seriously believe that Haruhi would ever allow him to ride with Miss Asahina? Such impertinence would require the death penalty!

I also have to wonder a little about those trees which they kept running into. What are the odds that Miss Nagato may have fiddled with the data occasionally in order to affect the outcome of those encounters (both to ensure that they happened - the sooner you stop the shorter the climb back to the top of the hill - and also to ensure that no one was injured (although I suppose that Haruhi might have influenced that one as well).
1/23/2020 c1 SomeOldBloke
Good story, well told. Haruhi is so in character here, Koizumi too. For some reason, Haruhi's line regarding dragging Kyon along and Kyon's faux pas shoot me now are gold to me.

Some trivia (minor details):
Kyon managed 2/3 of the slope on his first run, while the ride with Haruhi had most of its detail after that point

Kyon left the brigade meeting early? It didn't get a mention at the time (or how he managed it alive :) )

In my mind, Kyon has too much self-analysis, and Nagato overly chatty (not sure I see her adding a colloquial explanation). This might be just my poor recall of canon though.

Haruhi's physics is a little off

In the authors notes - could nominate a date - it has to be after valentine's, for example
1/22/2020 c1 Guest
It’s almost absurd at how good you are at writing every character, at this rate I’m going to have to read all of your stories.

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