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12/31/2020 c3 bagofgarbage
By all means do a Game of Thrones thing! I think that would be awesome! There’s always been little touches of supernatural in Redwall, but never quite enough to call it a real fantasy, ya know? I think adding some magic into the mix would be a great idea.

Also, the angle your taking with the world building is pretty cool. Vermin aren’t just “The Bad Guys,” they’re people too, Woodlanders aren’t just “the Good Guys” they can be violent and horrible too. It’s an interesting take, and honestly the lack of more sympathetic Vermin Characters in canon always kinda bugged me.

I do have a question or two though: Number 1 is does Mart-I mean Whiteheart have any close friends or family? I mean it is shown and stated that he is extremely loyal to Chilldeath and his people, and he expresses a fondness for his home, but does he have any strong bonds with anybody in particular? I think that kind of thing is important, ya know? Gives them a reason to fight, and all kinds of things.

Question number 2, is might we see other reincarnations of beloved characters in the future? Now I’m not asking for an outright spoiler, and you don’t have to answer this question at all if you don’t want to, but like, is that on the table at all? Or is it just Martin? Cause Reincarnated as a vermin Gonf would be awesome, not gonna lie.

I like this story a lot so far, it’s got strong bones, and I can’t to see where it goes! Good work!
4/9/2020 c1 Codj
I would thoroughly enjoy a continuation of this story! tis quite intriguing and a very nice concept!
3/16/2020 c1 Sebias
Gah! I forgot that my sibling was logged into her account. That last review was from me. :P
3/16/2020 c1 3Keva Strongbow
Oooooooooooooooooooh! Interesting...

You know, at first I had found it a little odd that Whiteheart could fight so good at eleven-seasons old. But then after reading the whole thing, I realized what a fascinating idea you have for this white fox. What with the "memories" and all.

I'm also a fan of your descriptions. Good job!

I really hope you update this!

Happy writing to you!
1/25/2020 c1 1Supermel1
please do continue the story. it is very interesting.

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