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12/15 c4 C0rrupt3dSpy
interesting, I thought the tallest would had known zim was responsible for the whole mess with the hijacking, but then again it was never explicitly said they found out. Also I like how you connected zim with both 777 and lard nar. Also looks like progress is being made on zim
12/14 c4 135Invader Johnny
I have the feeling that Zim's nightmare/flashback will play a very important role later on but for now there was a great breakthrough with what Foma put Zim through, he finally saw the hurt he had put the Irken Empire through but there's still much to do for the healing to begin both for Zim and the Empire.

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12/14 c4 45Zim'sMostLoyalServant
Hmm, very curious about Zim's weird flashback. Is it really from someone else, or did it happen to him somehow?

Meanwhile, loving that he finally had a real breakthrough. Hoping that something good comes of that.

Also really liking all the comic references, especially Zim's interactions with 777's kids.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
12/2 c3 Wolfen9
I like this story so far, well written, fresh, and interesting. Hope to see more in the near future.
11/26 c3 C0rrupt3dSpy
this is really well written. Its an interesting take on doing a study on zim’s mental state.
11/5 c3 Zim'sMostLoyalServant
Having to write this on the app while the site is glitched.

Anyway, great chapter. Excited to see Zim actually have a breakthrough.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
11/4 c3 135Invader Johnny
I can only say that it seems like Foma is slowly getting to Com, there's still a long way to go but the way I see It's, slow progress is better than none at all and Aim may not enjoy what's happening but in the end hopefully he'll see things differently and not in a bad way.

only time will tell.

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10/11 c2 7Saiba-of-the-IceWings
Really really excellent. To be honest, I’m getting back into writing myself, and frankly your story has been helping me figure out how to write well. You handle the feeling on a subtler level that both communicates it and simultaneously adds visual detail. I have to ask though, where do you come up with names for alien races and things of that nature? Do you just use whatever sounds good or comes to mind? Last thing, If you’d be open to it I have some ideas for stories that I want to write for IZ, but I’m not sure of the quality of all of them. I’d love to get your opinion on them, if you’d be open to it.
10/7 c2 135Invader Johnny
Foma is masterfully handling Zim, she knows exactly what to say to him and in the end while he's still not accepting the truth, he's slowly getting there.

Big shock when Zim saw Dib talking to Foma, no doubt about that.

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10/7 c2 45Zim'sMostLoyalServant
Well, that got a little intense there. Foma's really good at getting into Zim's head; even if she hasn't gotten him to accept the truth yet, she did still get him to acknowledge what the Tallest said.

Like Zim, I'm shocked about Dib's decision. Can't wait to see how Zim learns to process that.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
10/4 c1 7Saiba-of-the-IceWings
Good, very good. Keep going.
10/3 c1 103otherrealmwriter
Oh boy, this seems like Zim is in for it now. Loved how you put the human interpretation of psycholigsts and have Zim being questioned like this. Nice work.
10/3 c1 45Zim'sMostLoyalServant
Very interesting start here. Liking how Foma is already getting into Zim's head, though I have to wonder how much his memory blackouts have to do with his genuine problems, and how much is being done to him by her.

Looking forward to seeing this play out.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
10/3 c1 135Invader Johnny
Well this session with Foma certainly put Zim on edge several times as well as getting under his skin, whatever the case, it seem like she's finally getting to him since towards the end now he wants to talk.

Safe to say I'm intrigued on where this will lead.

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