8/11 c19 15RJRMovieFan
I can understand the idea of scrapping this story; it was always going to be difficult to insert this spy story into the original Pitch Perfect story and keep it canon compliant. I would love it if you went back and redid it. Maybe don’t have Chloe and Aubrey murder a Bella. Maybe have Chloe judge her father harsher once she learns the truth of what he di to Beca.
I can understand the idea of scrapping this story; it was always going to be difficult to insert this spy story into the original Pitch Perfect story and keep it canon compliant. I would love it if you went back and redid it. Maybe don’t have Chloe and Aubrey murder a Bella. Maybe have Chloe judge her father harsher once she learns the truth of what he di to Beca.
3/3 c17 3Mein Gott
I read this chapter with a furrowed brow and I was furiously shaking my head. Writer, there are a few things I take issue with:
1) Your definition of who is considered good seems questionable? Chloe still considers her father to be a "good" person? He CHOSE to RAPE Beca and then kill her best friend. He made horrible choices and didn't even redeem himself. That's not exactly a good person. That man deserved capital punishment. And Beca may have killed him out of revenge but because the evidence (in that recording) is stacked against him, her actions would be considered "self-defense." She technically should get awarded for eliminating the government threat now that the truth has been revealed.
Compassion is defined as "sympathetic pity and concern for the sufferings or misfortunes of others." A compassionate person would not rape anyone.
2) Character's in this story do an immediate 180 as a reaction to certain circumstances. There's no sense of conflict or struggle. It's like they immediately change their tune. They dont even question anything as they accept everything at face value. This seems to be a common trend in your stories.
3) how did Stacie royally fuck up? Chloe admitted that what she did was understandable so it wasn't a fuck up. Chloe just contradicted herself.
I read this chapter with a furrowed brow and I was furiously shaking my head. Writer, there are a few things I take issue with:
1) Your definition of who is considered good seems questionable? Chloe still considers her father to be a "good" person? He CHOSE to RAPE Beca and then kill her best friend. He made horrible choices and didn't even redeem himself. That's not exactly a good person. That man deserved capital punishment. And Beca may have killed him out of revenge but because the evidence (in that recording) is stacked against him, her actions would be considered "self-defense." She technically should get awarded for eliminating the government threat now that the truth has been revealed.
Compassion is defined as "sympathetic pity and concern for the sufferings or misfortunes of others." A compassionate person would not rape anyone.
2) Character's in this story do an immediate 180 as a reaction to certain circumstances. There's no sense of conflict or struggle. It's like they immediately change their tune. They dont even question anything as they accept everything at face value. This seems to be a common trend in your stories.
3) how did Stacie royally fuck up? Chloe admitted that what she did was understandable so it wasn't a fuck up. Chloe just contradicted herself.
2/25 c16 Jasmine Sanchez
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2/17 c15 15RJRMovieFan
Interesting twists to the story. Looking forward to reading more Beca and Chloe interactions. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Interesting twists to the story. Looking forward to reading more Beca and Chloe interactions. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
2/17 c15 Aira
I just really want it to go where Aubre and Chloe break Stacie and Beca’s heart. Then them realize that they’re siding with the wrong guy and be regretful to what they did. Haha. Thanks author!
I just really want it to go where Aubre and Chloe break Stacie and Beca’s heart. Then them realize that they’re siding with the wrong guy and be regretful to what they did. Haha. Thanks author!
2/11 c14 Halligan Dixon
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1/14 c11 15RJRMovieFan
Interesting that Beca is still so hostile to Chloe. I keep wondering why? Looking forward to reading more.
Interesting that Beca is still so hostile to Chloe. I keep wondering why? Looking forward to reading more.