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12/31/2020 c4 8Claircrystal
Lincoln could have used his fists instead of hitting the jock with a gun.
12/26/2020 c4 Amanny
Merry Christmas, what an amazing chapter.
12/22/2020 c3 Engineer1869
Man, that is quite a generous Christmas bonus Lincoln is giving to his workers. It was really nice to see him do that, not so nice was seeing Jacob not having any friends at school.

Looks like Luna is in town. Something tells me she's going bother Lincoln. At least it was nice to see the sisters get some blowback after Pulp Friction, Although you might want to rewrite the line that comes after "good they canceled the move ..."

I look forward to the next chapter.
12/20/2020 c3 FanB0I's Ghost
This is nice so far. But the only complaint is the grammar and some capitalization issues. I kinda wish you'd improve on that, but this is a good story that has a lot more potential to be discovered. Keep it up 1049!
12/21/2020 c3 3Candymancan
Full deck is fraud deck!
12/21/2020 c3 8Claircrystal
Why change the episode Pulp Friction by having the Loud sisters threaten Lincoln into creating super hero characters based on them for the comic he made?
12/20/2020 c3 25AutoKnight01
This is a nice start to a nice story. Though if I may Point something out. Nearly every paragraph written here is either one long sentence or just two not as long ones. It’s not written bad , however using “and” or “but” to keep the sentence going can feel a bit off for some people.

That being said I do genuinely look forward to seeing more of this.
12/20/2020 c3 20Luffy Turner
1049, Do you see something is wrong with this page?

Like... When you try to put an image for your fanfic cover it says 404 'file not found'?
12/20/2020 c3 52RCurrent
I just hope see again the rest of the Loud sisters and they can reconcilies with Lincoln
11/15/2020 c2 Engineer1869
Glad to see this getting updated.

Anyway its nice to see Lincoln reaching out to be there for Jacob, especially with how Jacob's parents are never there for him.

Is it safe to assume that Luna's band performing in Coors Field is going result in the sisters trying to force themselves into Lincoln's life?

Keep up the good work.
11/15/2020 c2 RCurrent
I just hope that the Louds can reconcilies with Lincoln.
11/3/2020 c1 Engineer1869
Looks interesting, I'll stick around to see where this goes.
10/11/2020 c1 8Claircrystal
You're so right about Lynn Sr actng more female like and not as his actual gender.
10/10/2020 c1 803Shaeril McBrown

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