10/13/2020 c1 10Nontacitare
This was adorable. You captured the characters beautifully. It was nice seeing Isabel and her friends just getting to be kids. And I loved the way you fleshed out Cristina and made her be from Galonia.
One grammar suggestion - when you write "intel" I think you mean "until." But overall, I really enjoy your writing.
Great story.
This was adorable. You captured the characters beautifully. It was nice seeing Isabel and her friends just getting to be kids. And I loved the way you fleshed out Cristina and made her be from Galonia.
One grammar suggestion - when you write "intel" I think you mean "until." But overall, I really enjoy your writing.
Great story.