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10/9/2020 c3 pancakes-for-you
I really like this concept and think you write well. You’re capturing the angst and paranoia and characters nicely. I’m guessing this is set after Angel Experiment?
I’d like to see longer chapters and maybe a little more interaction between the characters, or just their reactions to Max being around. Just so we can get a better grounding of where the story is heading and so you can build the tension a little bit! I’m really curious to see where this goes and how it resolves :)
Looking forward to seeing more!

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