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10/15/2020 c3 7Hero Central
Well the Nanny and her cupcake sidekick are back behind bars I bet theres no muffin making where they're going. Plus I'm glad everyone made amends over the misunderstanding and how one should never jump to conclusions despite past actions.

Just hope Jerry respects that they're grown ups now and don't need a nanny if he gets the same idea again, but I bet he'll remember the savage snowball beating he got during that whole fugitives thing before he even thinks about it.

Still alls well that ends well can't wait for the next chapter, feel free to check out some of my stories if you want.
9/30/2020 c3 20jettmanas
The heavyweight old-timers w/serious confidence. XD Good use of Myrna's throwing stars to pose a threat. Nick getting Mandy to help was a fun surprise. She really did come through for the girls way back in Eraser as well. :) No giant robot works for variety, ha. Funny chat on the stereotypical lines for some villains.

Interesting on Mandy learning the truth, and not getting memory wiped for a change. Should be fine- they've appeared in front of large crowds before, and even got a presidential award in front of the press, lol. I liked Sam's plan to hang out w/Mat, then the photo. Thanks for having Britney's (requested) moment as well! What a lucky guy w/those two. 0.0 And that mention of Space Much issues in the story!
9/30/2020 c3 25Boris Yeltsin
Another great effort by you both.
9/30/2020 c3 kevinbellemore
Two thumbs up as always
9/28/2020 c2 7Hero Central
Looks like the final confrontation is upon us, and I have to say love the words used by Nick to try and get Clover to see reason, and I hope by the end of this she’ll learn a valuable lesson about jumping to conclusions.

All the same keep up the good work.
9/27/2020 c2 216EverlastingEvanescence
Well technically, Nick was the one who threw hands first, so he challenged Clover to the fight first.

Other than that, I'm enjoying this.
9/25/2020 c2 20jettmanas
Wow, what a brutal fight. I'd have hoped Sam, Alex, and the rest would've jumped in right after the first hit last chapter. Good tension w/the emotions after, and an interesting time for the Supercross scene. Technically, the two aren't henchwomen, since that term is for followers of villains, but nice scene w/poor Haruka.

Fun use of Clover's upgraded weapon vs the villains. I liked her saving Nick for a chance for them to reconcile. It's hard to stay mad at her, I'd imagine. Well done w/Jerry's thoughts, then help in getting them home. (Getting across a college takes a while on foot) Solid cliffhanger!
9/25/2020 c2 25Boris Yeltsin
Well, Nick and Clover worked things out, but, now they have bigger fish to fry, so to speak.
9/25/2020 c2 kevinbellemore
Nicely done I hope they learned a lesson from this
9/22/2020 c1 7Hero Central
Oh boy this can't end well, I actually remember the Nanny as a villain I mean marrying Jerry and brainwashing him is one thing but to make the girls think he's hired her as a Nanny again so they'll quit thats a low blow.

But Nicks right there could be more going on here than meets the eye. And the Granny's back and still packing those cupcakes of hers it seems those two working together, oh boy lets hope the spies will listen to reason and try and stop this before it bets out of hand.
9/22/2020 c1 20jettmanas
Fun start w/the plans, then wild situation of Myrna (ha, the ninjistsu mention). Quite the reaction to Jerry. Clover was written a little too intense maybe, but hey- your story. Solid conflict w/Nick. I'm surprised everyone else left as well. I thought Britney and the other OCs would listen to the briefing.

Nice scenes w/the investigation after Mandy's funny part. Also, Sam, Clover and Alex each getting feedback. Good reaction to the Granny. Still not retired, huh. :) The Nick/Clover situation seemed to go too far, but again- your story. Nice one.
9/22/2020 c1 25Boris Yeltsin
Oh, boy. The granny, elderly villain who had some cupcake thing that reversed personalities one time, if I recall? Gereldine. Ugh, super agents, again? If they're at each other's throats, seems like that's part of their plan.
9/22/2020 c1 kevinbellemore
A good start I'll say

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