12/21/2020 c1 6TheSnarkMaster
I really enjoyed this! Your writing flowed very well together, and your dialogue was very real and didn’t feel clunky/out of character.
Loved the last couple paragraphs in Anya’s perspective, especially when she was comparing him to her imaginary Prince CharmingI just thought that little bit was clever considering the context.
Can’t wait to see the full story and I hope you are keeping up with writing it. Will you be posting to this story or starting a new one?
I really enjoyed this! Your writing flowed very well together, and your dialogue was very real and didn’t feel clunky/out of character.
Loved the last couple paragraphs in Anya’s perspective, especially when she was comparing him to her imaginary Prince CharmingI just thought that little bit was clever considering the context.
Can’t wait to see the full story and I hope you are keeping up with writing it. Will you be posting to this story or starting a new one?