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for Coraline: trapped forever

11/10/2020 c3 1BecWritesShtuff
Wow, that was really creepy, but Good! You have talent. Two things.
1. Paragraphs. It's good to have breaks in the text even if there every six lines or so. Paragraphs make it easier to read and to write. And it makes the chapters longer so its a win-win!
2. I want more detail! You've created such an interesting twist to Coraline. How do the buttons Look? How do they feel. Is the world still being destroyed? Ect. I know details are hard. Trust me. But I think they'll really help.
amazing job! I'm flowing this story! You are very talented.

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