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12/18/2020 c12 4tigerlily124
I loved this! Great job!
12/12/2020 c3 11AzureStriker2014
Seeing Daphne awakening on Mt. Satori, is amazing along with the encounter with Satori is very well done. This is a nice scene and it's the brief break Daphne needed after everything she's gone through in the last couple of chapters.

Ganon's introduction creepy to say the least with him trying to break Vincent's spirit was chilling to read. The flashback is heartbreaking with what happened between Vincent and the king.

I loved the ending of the chapter for a couple of reasons with the gang resolving to stay in Hyrule
The ending of the chapter is quite the tense cliffhanger with the gang facing another threat it's left me eager to see what will happen next. You did a great job with this chapter.
11/12/2020 c2 AzureStriker2014
One of the things I like about your stories is how well written the interactions between the characters are fantastic with special mention going to Shaggy and the rest of the gang encouraging Daphne to break free of the Shadow creature's hold on her.

I also love the fact the gang goes after Daphne and Vincent despite the poteinal danger which shows how strong their bonds are with each other.

Also, that is a devious plan the shadow sorceress has come up with in which I have a feeling will soon be set into motion.

Great job as always with this intense chapter. Keep up the good work!
10/31/2020 c1 AzureStriker2014
Whoa, this is quite the intresting start to this little story since I love seeing your version of Scooby Doo and the Curse of thirteen Ghosts season two.

I loved the phone call between Daphne and Velma espeically with Velma saying both she and Fred were worried about Daphne.

The scene with Daphne falling into a trance when the shadow form took over her. My goodness, my heart was pounding throughout the whole scene. Seeing the gang attempting to rescue her, but fail with the shadow tuanting Vincent, resulting in quite the cliffhanger.

Overall, you're off to a fantastic start with this story! When I get the chance I'll be looking forward to seeing more of this excellent story.
10/31/2020 c12 665LuckyLadybug
A very suspenseful and intense final battle! I love that Daphne was able to get the emerald back, and so creepy when Veran transformed!

Owww, that definitely sounds painful! I have no idea how Daphne would get relief from hot water instead of cold, heh.

The scene with Shaggy and Scooby is very sweet. So true that they would have a lot of guilt too! And then the scene with Vincent is the perfect wrap-up! Squee triumphs!
10/31/2020 c11 LuckyLadybug
Squeeee, this chapter is wonderful! I will never get tired of familial squee, and found family makes it even more squeeable! I love how surprised everyone is too, both the good guys and the bad guys. LOL.

And a cliffhanger ending, oh gosh! Poor everyone!
10/30/2020 c12 7threedaysrey
it's hard to believe this fanfic is done but i enjoyed it so much! and i loved the group hug the gang shared at the end. also the parts where Vincent said that there is nothing he wouldn't do to ensure their safety and Daphne saying that she and the others will stand by him are just the sweetest! i'm so excited for your next fic for your season 2 of 13 Ghosts. you did such a fantastic job on this! ?
10/25/2020 c10 665LuckyLadybug
Such terrifying encounters, perfect for Halloween! Poor Scooby!

LOL, Shaggy and Daphne dragging Vincent away. That was awesome.

Shaggy offering to be the bait was so moving and powerful! And oh yikes, what horrible and understandable fears for Vincent to ponder on now!
10/25/2020 c9 LuckyLadybug
Another nice conversational chapter! LOL, those earmuffs really don't sound like something Vincent would wear. Heh. I love him giving his cape to Scooby!

It's interesting learning more about Flim-Flam's backstory, and how you tie in all those different Scooby series together in your verse. The ending banter and paragraphs are very sweet!
10/25/2020 c8 LuckyLadybug
I love the opening scene! Foiled again! Lol.

This is a nice breather chapter. Everyone needed a break, and the conversations are so sweet. I love Vincent insisting that Shaggy and Scooby are not cowards! And oh, what a horrifying and heartbreaking backstory!
10/18/2020 c8 59wsdsrdbw4096
I really have to say that you sure wrote this well with the twists and turns. The rescue in the previous chapter, particularly with Shaggy hacking away at the pool of dark magic with an axe, harming the dark sorcerer in the process, was quite the highlight, and I've always looked forward to parts where Shaggy and Daphne were working together.

Either way, keep up the good work and look forward to see how this series continues!
10/15/2020 c7 665LuckyLadybug
So sweet of Daphne and Shaggy to think about keeping sensitive eyes away! I love when Shaggy has deep moments!

The hurt/comfort in this chapter is very nice. It's such a powerful scene as they try to make the spell work and it finally does! Squeee.

Shaggy actually having done damage, ha! That's sure going to keep the creep mad, though.

Happy reunions are always a great way to end a chapter!
10/15/2020 c6 LuckyLadybug
So beautiful to see how much everyone wants to help Vincent, with even Shaggy and Scooby not being afraid to get involved!

Powerful to know that the real truth is known! And heartbreaking that Vincent doesn't know it!

Such a twisted mind, doing all of this out of revenge!

The presumed dead scene is heartbreaking and poignant! And them then realizing Vincent needs their help, and that he's actually calling for them, is wonderfully squeeful!

It's fun to see what's going on back home. Chilling, though, especially the weakening barrier and what it means! I wonder what Veran would think to know she isn't trusted or considered loyal.
10/15/2020 c5 LuckyLadybug
Such a chilling chapter, perfect for October! How creepy about the sky and the mechanical beings!

Heartbreaking when Vincent has to make the others honor their promise! I can imagine how conflicted they would feel!

The fight is very intense and the enemy so heartless and cruel. It's actually rather sad that he doesn't believe in loyalty because he was betrayed (unless that's a lie and he was the one who betrayed all the time).

How horrible for poor Vincent! And what a haunting last thought!
10/15/2020 c4 LuckyLadybug
The devotion is very powerful and sweet! Squeee.

I love the humor bits when they get to the inn. LOL. And oh my, definitely a good thing they hurried out to help with getting the axe!

Vincent's influenced dream is heartbreaking! How horrible to have that brought against him again!
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