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12/27/2020 c1 kirioka
I really enjoyed your story, especially how you are including all of the different characters and alternating perspectives. I kind of get why you stopped it here with how the scope would blow up, but I’ll be following in case you decide to come back to it.
12/9/2020 c5 VadRev
Спасибо за продолжение.

Thank you for continuing.
12/9/2020 c5 Legion29
Honestly i find Orihime's overflowing positivity Hilarious.
12/9/2020 c4 Guest
I love this! I can’t wait for the next chapter
12/9/2020 c4 5sanbi221
I have to say this one by was probably your best chapter yet. It was showing just how resourceful Tatsuki can be while keeping the suspense. It was kind of like seeing David vs Goliath. Plus it was veering away from canon, and giving character development to the side characters, so I didn’t know what to expect. I was cheering her on just hoping she would stick it to Urahara after that sheepdog speech, and kill Shrieker herself, but alas it wasn’t meant to be. I don’t know what she was going to do next after that explosion, so it’s probably a good thing Orihime showed up. I mean if blowing it up didn’t work, what else could she do. Still, “I think...I’m going to have to wipe a lot of memories,” is a bit of an understatement. Rukia better make sure that footage doesn’t go viral first and delete it from the cashiers phone, or she’s going to have a major problem on her hands. Once again great chapter.
12/2/2020 c4 VadRev
Очень интересная глава. Фактически это прекрасный первый выход необученного новобранца, после которого следует ставить зачёт автоматически. И принимать в школу шинигами. Или ликвидировать, что бы в головы окружающих не закрадывалось глупых мыслей о том, что шинигами не столь незаменимы, как кажется.

Very interesting Chapter. In fact, this is a great first outing for an untrained recruit, after which you should approve the passing score automatically. And to accept in school Shinigami. Or eliminate, that would in the heads of others did not creep stupid thoughts that Shinigami are not as irreplaceable as it seems.
12/2/2020 c4 Fortitude501
Nice.

I like how you didn't portray Tatsuki as some random helpless human. Even better is that she was smart enough to survive against the shrieker by utilising the surrounding environment around her.

This is way better than Chad helping Ichigo using his already known unnatural strength.
12/2/2020 c4 Legion29
I guess you could say Tatsuki is all Burned out...i'll see myself out for that terrible pun.
12/1/2020 c3 Fortitude501
Like the idea of Tatsuki getting more of the screentime.

I never liked how she got shafted in Canon.
10/2/2020 c2 sanbi221
So far it seems to be following the manga just with Orihime doing it, so some things are a little different, but it’s to be expected I suppose. Nothing drastic has happened yet at this point as the first few chapters was mostly world building and introducing characters. I think that won’t really happen until Uryu gets introduced. To be honest I thought Ichigo was going to die, or at least his sisters anyway. Speaking of I’m curious if he will still get powers? Because even if he doesn’t unlock his Shinigami powers, he could be approached by Yhwach and be recruited/kidnapped and become a Sternritter; or he could be approached by Xcution and train to unlock his fullbring. Well I guess only time will tell.
10/1/2020 c2 VadRev
Очень интересно. Спасибо за работу. Аве Император!

Very interesting. Thank you for your work. Hail The Emperor!
10/1/2020 c1 sanbi221
I liked it. You got Orihime’s personality down, though with that ending I’m guessing Ichigo is dead unless the hollow never attacked his family. It also seems her outfit is similar to Matsumoto’s then, although having the hairpins still be her weapons isn’t something I would do, since how is she supposed to send hollows to Soul Society? Unless that’s her Shikai, but she has less spiritual pressure than Ichigo, so she shouldn’t automatically be in it. But that’s my opinion anyway. Since Orihime is the main character, I hope you would change the plot to make it different than the manga. Well I’ll give this a follow in case you decide to continue it.
9/30/2020 c1 Legion29
I've never seen a fic where Orihime becomes a Soul reaper i'm interested in seeing where this goes.

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