7/14 c15 11Bonnie Sveen Fan
Oh, poor Ethan, it can't be good for him to be having seizures all the time. Glad Cal was there for him, I hate the fact Ethan doesn't mention Cal anymore and it's sad, hope Ethan's surgery goes ok.
Oh, poor Ethan, it can't be good for him to be having seizures all the time. Glad Cal was there for him, I hate the fact Ethan doesn't mention Cal anymore and it's sad, hope Ethan's surgery goes ok.
7/10 c14 Guest
Just read this from the start and I love it! Your writing is amazing and I love how caring everyone’s being towards Ethan. Can’t wait for the next chapter :D
Just read this from the start and I love it! Your writing is amazing and I love how caring everyone’s being towards Ethan. Can’t wait for the next chapter :D
7/8 c13 Bonnie Sveen Fan
Liked the chapter. Like the fact Connie kept watch on Ethan, so that he wasn't alone, it was nice of Cal to bring Ethan in a duvet from home. Maybe we could have a scene were Cal visits his brother?
Liked the chapter. Like the fact Connie kept watch on Ethan, so that he wasn't alone, it was nice of Cal to bring Ethan in a duvet from home. Maybe we could have a scene were Cal visits his brother?
4/7 c12 Bonnie Sveen Fan
Glad the boys have been reunited. If only Ethan would mention Cal on- screen more.
Glad the boys have been reunited. If only Ethan would mention Cal on- screen more.
4/4 c10 Bonnie Sveen Fan
Like the image of Dylan dabbing at Connie's mascara, not knowing what it really is. Poor Ethan, he really is frightened. I wonder if he will remember what happened to him? Looking forward to more.
Like the image of Dylan dabbing at Connie's mascara, not knowing what it really is. Poor Ethan, he really is frightened. I wonder if he will remember what happened to him? Looking forward to more.
4/1 c8 Guest
Oh I’m so glad you’ve uploaded again! I just read it all again and despite such sad content it cheered me up on a low night. It’s a lovely piece of writing, and shows you’ve got real talent for characterisation. Each one of them has such depth, shown so subtly somehow. I love it. I really do hope you’ll be able to upload again soon!
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Oh I’m so glad you’ve uploaded again! I just read it all again and despite such sad content it cheered me up on a low night. It’s a lovely piece of writing, and shows you’ve got real talent for characterisation. Each one of them has such depth, shown so subtly somehow. I love it. I really do hope you’ll be able to upload again soon!
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10/22/2020 c7 Bonnie Sveen Fan
I liked this chapter, enjoyed the Cal and Ethan scene. I miss them together on - screen, Ethan's not the same anymore. Sorry for late review, looking forward to more.
I liked this chapter, enjoyed the Cal and Ethan scene. I miss them together on - screen, Ethan's not the same anymore. Sorry for late review, looking forward to more.
10/17/2020 c6 Bonnie Sveen Fan
I enjoyed this chapter, nice to see the addition of Grace. I'm a bit worried for Ethan now, though.
I enjoyed this chapter, nice to see the addition of Grace. I'm a bit worried for Ethan now, though.
10/4/2020 c3 11Bonnie Sveen Fan
I liked seeing Serena. I also liked seeing Morven. Poor Ethan, looking forward to more.
I liked seeing Serena. I also liked seeing Morven. Poor Ethan, looking forward to more.