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14h c11 Guest
Don’t know how I’ve only just come across this fic but I’m hooked
1/7 c11 Guest
Someone stole your title for a Rollisi fic :(
1/7 c11 3MariskaDownUnder
This chapter was fantastic. I really want Penelope (btw I LOVE that name!) to open up to either Olivia or Elliot. It would be nice to see a couple of chapters of Olivia's close bond with her too. I really want to know what Lewis has been up to when Penelope spends her time here!

Also, a chapter about Liv actually giving birth would be really cool.

I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY! woriutoweutowte LOL
1/7 c10 MariskaDownUnder
WOW.

Elliot was a bit of a dick in this one but it comes from love, I know... I hope Liv opens up to him x
1/7 c9 MariskaDownUnder
Ugh. this was a hard read, i almost cried. I really wanted Liv to stay for Christmas. I also wish someone would just give Liv a hug. Shes doing it so tough and always on her own. I hate it but it makes for such wonderful reading. x
1/7 c8 MariskaDownUnder
Awww that was so sweet when Elliot added the money in to her little purse. That was my fav part. So sweet! And yeah, if I was Kathy I'd be super pissed lol
1/7 c6 MariskaDownUnder
WOW. Lewis is her father? Fuck. thats messed up! He DID get to Olivia. Interesting development to that story, indeed. I wonder what's going on with her though. Hopefully Lewis isnt as much of a psycho to Lollie as he was to Olivia.
1/7 c5 MariskaDownUnder
Im still clueless about the babies name! Maybe ive missed something but I havent figured it out haha, maybe im dumb?
1/5 c11 Guest
please address livs weight gain since early seasons with Elliott more in later chapters like you have with 5:2 in this one
1/4 c11 120Amilyn
Gods.

I owe you ten entire comments on the first 10 chapters of this because it BLOWS ME AWAY.

This chapter, with the oversized sweatshirt to feel safe at Lewis's, with the oversized sweatshirt to hide that she's so thin, with the oversized sweatshirt to hide that she has a grown-up body...SO SO SO well done.

And Elliot's responses...really goo. I like that he can't believe that this is a "normal" phase given crappy society (but I'm also like, "Elliot! LOOK AROUND!") I LOVE Olivia hating on Photoshop because...YEAH. Nice work with the modernity of Ubereat and Parent portal and being able to top off a lunch account...

I love the dedication that Lollie has to dance and excellence. It's very Olivia. I'm just...I'm SO GLAD she looks like Olivia. (Though, for a dancer, that height is just Not Fair...the growth spurt to that height from a year or two prior is going to have mucked up her balance, extension, ...everything for a while...and it means she'll not be as able to do ANY ballet professionally.)

I LOVE LOVE LOVE the explanation of loving Hamilton as being about the importance of BELONGING. And Elliot foretting, again, that he knows that Olivia grasps at straws for something to BELONG to. It would be a hard to thing to remember for someone who has always had so many touchstone points to belong to.

I'm just...I adore this story beyond words. It's SO. Damned. GOOD. The non-linear nature of it...the slow and smart way you're revealing bits and bits of the story. I picture you with an entire wall wallpapered in butcher paper with a list of the scenes you need to tell the story, mapped out according to when which one gets placed in the narrative. It's SUCH a complicated structure to keep track of for an author. As a reader...it's SO GOOD.

Gods, though...Olivia. This is SO unfair.

I'm just...I'm going to be pouncing on EVERY part that drops. Thank you for a GREAT ride.
1/3 c11 spacekitten2700
sad can't one Lewis take him out please
1/3 c11 6deviltown
I can't tell how much I love your writing style! And this freaking plot too. I'm so invested in this story. You have my favorite Olivia characterization and she's not even in there a lot... Anyways, super excited to see where this is going
1/3 c11 16Lunacy1111
So good! Love how in tune Elliott is with Lollie, just like with her mother. Wearing the sweatshirt to feel safe, and knowing that Liv has done the same so often is so beautiful and bittersweet. I love the bond Liv has with her daughter, but i kinda hope it's Elliott that Lollie finally opens up with. Definitely want Lollie calling Elliott when Liv has PTSD. But also want to find out what happened to Lollie. But maybe they will tie together. This story can be so heartbreaking, but so beautiful at the same time. Thank you for all the updates!
1/3 c11 7andy1990
Uggggg I hate that Elliot and Olivia aren’t together.I hope Lewis didn’t mess with Lollie Can’t wait for more
1/3 c11 4Ashleyo28
This was another great chapter!

I really worried about Lollie in this chapter. I’ve worried about her since learning Lewis had visitation, but between the sweatshirt, the food, and knowing something happened at the visit, I’m really worried about her.

I did love that she wore the sweatshirt because it smelled like her mom and made her feel safe, especially because I would assume Olivia took it from Elliot because it made her feel safe.

I can’t say enough how much I enjoy this story! Excited for what comes next!
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