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2/8 c4 theshape821
Love the story. As usual, you have managed to keep everybody in character. Have you given any thought in writing a 2018 Hallowween fanfic? I would love to see a MM/Allyson fic or a MM/Karen. I think the 2018 Myers is just creepier looking with the dead eye, and how smooth he is. Myers was always supposed to be around 6'2''. At least the John Carpenter Myers.
12/7/2020 c4 Victoria Jamie
This was such a creative ending, I’ve never seen anything like it. I adore this story, and I appreciate you for not making Michael Myers too soft. There was still tension. This is a master piece, muah!
11/6/2020 c4 iirvine
Amazing story! I was truly sad to see it end, as I was looking forward to Jamie and Michael's shenanigans on the run haha. But telling it through news reports was incredibly creative and I was satisfied with the ending. Your writing is really something. You mentioned you were a teacher before, and I can certainly tell from your work that you're an educator. Your students are lucky to have you!

But I'm really just in awe over your characterizations. Michael has got to be one of the most difficult characters to write and pinpoint but you do it so effortlessly. His mannerisms are so small but telling, I always get giddy whenever he shows up. You do an impeccable job of world building and crafting a satisfying story every time. Your writing is everything I could want from the Halloween franchise, it's so well done that it could be canon.

Just, thank you so much for sharing your quality work. Binging your stories have made my last few weeks so much better. I'm usually not one to write reviews as I'm pretty shy, but you deserve more appreciation! I really hope you do another Halloween story, but I also hope you also feel free to write whatever you want. Have a wonderful day and stay safe in these trying times!
11/2/2020 c3 Guest
Brilliant chapter! Can't wait for the next one. :)
10/31/2020 c4 1Jason Chandler
Good ending! It would seem like Jamie is on the run with Mikey and living pretty well. XD
10/31/2020 c1 25Mauryn
Wow! I'm always so happy to see Jamie not being forgotten in fan fiction.

I admit that my first reaction to this was "Are you kidding me! Some lawyer is forcing a seven -year-old orphan to visit a mass murderer?" Or is this guy a real a lawyer?

I hope Loomis will be in this? He finds out what's going on, he'll have a fit, as he should do.

This was a terrific, and very startling, beginning. I can't wait to read more now.
10/30/2020 c3 1Jason Chandler
Another good chapter! Seems like Jamie is conflicted.
10/29/2020 c2 Jason Chandler
Good chapter! Looks like Mikey woke up. XD
10/29/2020 c1 Jason Chandler
Good start, I wonder how Loomis will feel about Jamie visiting her uncle?

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