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I like this. It seems simple a first, but it requires some deeper thought to get the most out of it. I especially like the minimalist approach, telling us all we need to know about the main characters with as little exposition as possible. Then there's Daphne's sultriness which you describe to perfection, as well as the existentialist pillow talk that somehow doesn't seem out of place. Very good indeed.
I like this. It seems simple a first, but it requires some deeper thought to get the most out of it. I especially like the minimalist approach, telling us all we need to know about the main characters with as little exposition as possible. Then there's Daphne's sultriness which you describe to perfection, as well as the existentialist pillow talk that somehow doesn't seem out of place. Very good indeed.