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6/16 c19 364Bl4ckHunter
Good chapter and ending.

Nice moments between Oliver and Laurel and good fight scenes. No sympathies for Takeo or Yakuza.

And Laurel is a DA, nice.

No kidding, Laurel was mishandled as BC and skillwise, she was the weakest of all Canaries (Sara, Dinah, Black Siren, Laurel). I tried to handle her skills better too in my stories.

Otherwise, good fic.
6/9 c14 2DarkerEvening
Okay... thought it was playful, and they actually did got serious! Still, they're adults. Kinda of get it, as Felicity went through the same thing with Dt. Malone. Wait till Oliver learns this, and how he'll have to learn and he better man to know what is in Laurel's best interests.

Baby Steps!

Rene flirting! LOL!
And Laurel and Evelyn! Finally we get these Canaries together, even after how much inspirational impact Laurel had on Evelyn. The Black Siren scenes barely count.

Love that ladder thing! So glad nobody walked in!
6/9 c13 DarkerEvening
Yeah, would have been awesome timing!

Would love to see Cisco's overdid suits! Wonder if Laurel's new suit resembles Injustice 2 suit?!

Wonder if Oliver was thinking about Laurel's feelings when they were fighting Darhk.

So funny how when Laurel said the District Attorney's spot was filled-they as heck didn't know it was occupied by a foe who is just 10 steps ahead of them!
"Green Arrow? Ugh!"
"No... Prometheus."
6/8 c18 364Bl4ckHunter
True on the background with the Yamashiro and ARGUS never explained, I also used my own spin on Takeo and don’t get me started on how stupid Season 4 was.

Good fight scenes with Takeo.

Looking forward to more.
6/1 c17 Bl4ckHunter
Good chapter.

Ah, Felicity's snippy comments, when she is jealous of Oliver being with anyone else than her makes me wanna smack her in the face. Don't blame you on not wanting to write the scenes where Felicity throws a tantrum and Oliver or someone else calls her out for it, as much as I always enjoy someone calling Felicity out on her crap and putting her in her place, after a time, it gets repetitive and tiring to do, I most of the time try to make Felicity more tolerable and understanding and if necessary, give her a reality check, only occassionally very brutal one.

Good fight scene with Prometheus and makes sense why Laurel was beaten.
5/25 c16 Bl4ckHunter
Good chapter.

Frankly, didn’t like the Claybourne angle for a lots of reasons, since as interesting as it was to have Seasons 1 and 5 connected, Claybourne was a weak link. Every main villain up until Season 4 had a connection to Oliver, Malcolm and Slade in particular, with Ra’s and Darhk it was because of Sara and the League and like I said, Claybourne was a very weak link and as good as Segarra was in the role, there are so many things wrong with Chase as Prometheus, IMO.

And I think that the fact that Chase knew the full extent of circumstances of Malone’s kidnapping in 5x09 should’ve tipped Oliver off somehow but the writers had to make the whole Team Arrow completely braindead to prop Chase up.

Nice that Laurel talked some sense to Oliver and makes sense Prometheus would get Laurel suspended.
5/22 c15 Bl4ckHunter
Good chapter.

After the previous episode, the recruits were just hypocrites, first they condemn Oliver for the List and accuse him of being a serial killer but have no problem with Vigilante, who has no regards to collateral damage or innocent people getting caught in the crossfire.

Poor Laurel here
5/8 c14 Bl4ckHunter
Good chapter.

Uh, not a fan of Evelyn and Curtis as recruits, but it's your choice and Laurel kicking their asses was amusing.

Good changes and fight scenes.

Laurel hooking up with Chance wasn't something I expected but it was amusing.
5/3 c13 1godric777
i think this story has potential to run through season 5, 6 and 7
5/3 c2 godric777
this is going well so far :)
5/3 c13 Fan user
Very very good! I love it! Thank you for doing this, I hope you do more! I’m looking forward to this!
5/2 c13 364Bl4ckHunter
Yeah, Season 5 was about moving on but there are issues I had abou it, such as retconning Season 1 or the writers turning Oliver into a monster.

Nice upgrade of Laurel’s suit and even in Season 1 towards the end Quentin gave Oliver and Laurel his blessing.

Hope you’ll handle Season 5 better, since like I said, I didn’t like how the writers were trying to turn Oliver into a serial killer and the ‘confession’ was frankly stupid, plus Chase was ridiculously overpowered and had weak personal connection to Oliver as the main villain, unlike Malcolm or Slade, plus, the whole Team Arrow was made completely brain-dead around Chase the whole time before the reveal that he was Prometheus.
4/28 c12 Guest2.0
Did you get some of the names from Altered Carbon on Netflix?
4/27 c12 Bl4ckHunter
Good chapter.

This is more realistic than the rushed training Laurel had with Nyssa.
3/31 c11 Agent N
Great job. Nice to see Laurel does a training montage. Good to see Tatsu will train her. But I like the original idea about her trained by Lady Shiva. While Maggi Q was good cast to played that chracter, I prefer the actress(I forgot the name) who played the Magistrate who fought Rosario Dawson's Ahsoka Tano in the Mandalorian S2.
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