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8/2 c3 Guest
Nice job! Loving how it’s going so far.
8/1 c1 Guest
You should do a jak and daxter fanfic where Keira helps jak and daxter fight gol and maia
7/26 c3 16EquinoxWolf
This chapter covered a lot of ground compared to the last two. Good progress.
7/25 c2 1Arkham Knight22
I love this new insight into this book series!

can't wait to read more of this series
7/25 c3 325Awareness Bringer
The chapter is looking good, although, thinking about the sequels, I'm starting to wonder if Carmelita will leave Interpol behind eventually and how that would effect the rest of the storyline, but that's for the far future.
7/13 c2 Awareness Bringer
Looks good. Some spell checking might required, though. For one example, when you wrote "traverse", you forget the "e" at the end. Still, I'm looking forward to me
7/12 c1 Awareness Bringer
Not a bad depiction, and I think it should go on Archive of Our Own as well, but the gameplay element probably should've been omitted, there needs to be a comma for Paris, France, and I recommend reading the Sly Cooper reading materials from the comics to the manuals, if you can find them online, since the former depict a good first encounter between Sly and Carmelita while the latter says that Inspector Fox is the fourth generational member of her family after either one of her parents, grandparents, and great-grandparents to take up law enforcement.

I don't mean to nitpick, I'm just letting you know about the above for the sake of argument.
6/22 c2 Guest
When will we see what happens next?
5/25 c2 Guest
Will we have more chapters? And maybe get some sexy bits to add a little flair to the story?
5/15 c2 Guest
Nice work, can’t wait for the big showdown.
4/7 c2 16EquinoxWolf
I think the descriptions of Carmelita's weapons could have been saved until she needed to use them, rather than unloaded all at once at the very start of the chapter. It would have made the info feel more relevant at the time.

As for the clue bottles, I wonder if there's any real value in including them since it was more of a completionist side quest to unlock the final cutscene than anything crucial to the story as it progressed. My experience was that I didn't even use most of the moves I learned from unlocking the safes. Sly 2 made the mechanic simpler by having one safe in the boss's room, which here could hold every page in Raleigh's possession.
4/6 c2 sonicflash78
I hope this goes up to sly 4 that way Sir Garth Cooper doesnt Hit on Carmelita
4/6 c2 SwabberSCCF
So far it's doing well. Its nice to see that you updated it. I'm glad I followed it.
3/5 c1 61D.J. Scales
Wow. Very impressive.
2/24 c1 2MetalFox2013
Very interesting take. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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