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4/4 c18 5AlexFalTon
Scorr, you shall be remembered... Like, for a while, I just noticed him in the past two chapters. Myrai cares though, and Snowpaw cares for Myrai - dudes acting like he's her dad or something, pretty sweet actually. Remember when Snowpaw was the baby of the Island group, now he's pretty grown up.

"Why not try both?" Myrai, the healer warrior. Sounds tough, but I love the idea. I'm hopeful for Myrai's future.

But not for these new bad guys, Gale the raven and the weasal commander. Clearly bad news.
3/23 c17 AlexFalTon
Dun. Dun. Dunnnnnmn. War. War never changes. And its come for Redwall at last.

Very nice that Scorr is alive. I don't really have much issues, I'm glad Rose and Ewalt are living a nice life. Snowpaw is being a good bud and it seems he's enjoying himself. Kinda funny for Suran to have a family (after all that time he moaned about it being a great fear of his) and his son, hopefully, will turn out for the best with the Long Patrol.

Good chapter. Don't have many questions or theories at the moment. Not even about the Taggerung.
3/10 c2 menir
Awww, poor Ubel sounds so defeated after his failed conquest
2/4 c12 Guest
Yeah people do post on other sites more so than not I feel but again its not like you are obligated to anyhow.

Royal Road
Wattpad
Archive of our own
Spacebattles creative writing forum

There are some more. However again, though it depends where the fandom is kind of where you may get reviews.

seem to be the most active still for redwall.
12/28/2020 c3 7Sebias of Redwall
(SPOILERS, Y'ALL. READ THE STORY FIRST.)

Woah. Eventful chapter. The chieftain is dead. I wasn't expecting him to die like that, but I was pretty satisfied with how you did it. I'm rather... sad that he died. He was a cool character (if, a relatively evil character, but eh, details. He had morals and respect) RIP.

It's cool that Gillem would actually try to recruit Olkuna. Can't let abilities go to waste during a war. :P I wonder how that will go.

Good stuff, mate! Keep up the fabulous work.

Happy writing to you!
12/28/2020 c2 Sebias of Redwall
Aha! Wildflight's babe *will* be the Taggerung. Nice, nice. I... . don't exactly believe Gale when he says that Wildflight will survive. But we'll seeee.
I like how this battle has started. I'm a big fan of your action sequences, and I'm curious to see how this one goes.

Happy writing to you!
12/28/2020 c1 Sebias of Redwall
Ooooh! This a great start, I'm enjoying it. I appreciate your descriptions and prose quite a lot. Even though I think there is a few issues with what tense everything is written in occasionally. But considering English isn't your native language, I'm quite impressed! The characters and the story's initiating plot are established well, and I'm interested in both. I'm curious which babe will be the Taggerung... The chieftain's would be cool, and after all, the dude has gone through a lot of bloody trouble to ensure that his son will be the prophecied one. :P But I also think it would be neat if it was somebeast unexpected. For example... what is Wildflight's condition? Could she be pregnant? Intrigue...

Great start! Happy writing to you!
12/24/2020 c1 Guest
I respect your tenacity and consistent updates at least overall time is concerned. Thanks for writing the sequel. Have you thought about not only posting it here but other sites as well? There is wattpad, AO3, Royal Road, etc. I do understand that where the community is does limit where you want to post at times.
11/14/2020 c3 T120
Your talent for creating complex and interesting vermin characters never fails to impress. I was a great fan of Weaves of Destiny in good part because of that ability. Now, more than anything, I wonder what will become of Zayrha and her child, this new Taggerung born out of the death of the Juskalin.

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