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1/2 c14 Guest
Personally I really like the twists this story has, loads of fanfictions just follow the plot all the time and stick an OC in there. It’s refreshing to have an OC who exists outside of the plot in a way. I was totally here for Dahlia’s interference, Aria could come back having learnt something and intimidating Esther because she knows all the tea lmao. I agree with you that Dahlia definitely had a lot of untapped potential. On the Freya level, i like the idea of her being OOC more than an entirely new OC. A badass witch and maybe more of a relationship between Freya and Kol, because that always confused me, you have Kol who is somebody who loves witches and a sister who is a witch. Why was there not a friendship because of this? I saw one review talk about how it will be nice to see Aria, focus more on herself and less on her family, but I really like that aspect of her character because it sort of complements Kol, because Aria cares a lot about her family and misses out on having some fun and Kol can show her how to have fun, probably while Marcel disapproves from a distance and Aria plays matchmaker for him and Rebekah. Ignore the people who are being negative, at the end of the day this is your story, you are the one who has to write it and if they don’t like it they don’t have to read it. Anyway sorry for this review because it’s kind of all over the place and many words. Happy New Year! Hopefully you have a better year this year! - M.
1/2 c14 1hiareportsyou
Freya being OOC is cool, making characters not 2d card board cutouts is always cool.

I'm really hoping sometime down the road Aria turns mentally into a semi regular human. Yknow, not constantly obsessing over family, and living their life solely around that same family. Seems like a shit way to live, even tho we've seen Marcel emotionally manipulate her already, so she's probably this way on purpose.
12/26/2020 c13 hiareportsyou
I'm happy, this was a great change, having Dahlia actually have a motive behind gaining power was interesting. However, Dahlia has to be careful. Channeling Freya and Aria? That means she'll be getting the majority of her magic from others, if they both turn on her at the same time... Bye bye Dahlia, especially with Hope on the way.
12/26/2020 c13 Guest
Bring her back to life please
12/25/2020 c12 Haley tuttle
I love Aria and kol romance! Merry Christmas!
12/25/2020 c12 hiareportsyou
Im... Dissapointed, you had so many options, yet you chose Esther when you did a forced sacrifice so you could continue canon plot, yet you chose Esther? Why not Freya? She asleep, yes. But she's waking up soon, thus could potentially do it, and is many times more powerful even without the sleep spell compared to Esther, the fact is if Aria is equal to Harvest Girl Davina, she's far stronger than Esther. So having Esther torture her makes no sense to me. Or Dahlia, she would love to grab a being literarly made from magic like Aria to draw from.

Overall I'm just disappointed. Any changes so far have been merely superficial, and it seems like no matter what, Aria doesnt actually matter to the plot because EVERYTHING so far would have happened without her.

Its just... Sad. I hope actual changes will happen soon, because so far it's just another OPMC that somehow manages to rehash canon.
12/25/2020 c12 Grace of the Damned
Love it! Merry Christmas and thank you for the update!
12/25/2020 c12 Guest
Why did you do that? I hope Aria lives without the manipulation of Esther
12/19/2020 c11 Guest
Don’t kill Aria please
12/13/2020 c10 Guest
I don’t want Aria sacrificed please
12/8/2020 c9 mrs. morgan 35
More please
12/5/2020 c9 Guest
Please write more
11/28/2020 c8 Guest
Love it
11/27/2020 c7 2ThePhantomismyLove
So far so good. I hope that Aria won’t be used by anyone especially the witches
11/15/2020 c6 Guest
Omg please the suspense, I was not ready for that twist, and the fact that she doesn’t know, this story is so good. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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