10/25/2020 c19 21B.E.A.T.N
Aw, that's a really sweet ending. on this story. Definitely among your best work. Have a great day/night and stay safe.
Aw, that's a really sweet ending. on this story. Definitely among your best work. Have a great day/night and stay safe.
10/25/2020 c18 B.E.A.T.N
The tilting heads always makes me chuckle. Can't wait to see how the story ends.
The tilting heads always makes me chuckle. Can't wait to see how the story ends.
10/25/2020 c17 B.E.A.T.N
God, the Beldams final form gave me nightmares as a kid. And good job with the scene of Coraline and Alexis escaping.
God, the Beldams final form gave me nightmares as a kid. And good job with the scene of Coraline and Alexis escaping.
10/25/2020 c9 B.E.A.T.N
That cat is still cool, even in a Fanfiction story. Well done capturing that coolness.
That cat is still cool, even in a Fanfiction story. Well done capturing that coolness.
10/25/2020 c8 B.E.A.T.N
Glad to see someone have a reasonable reaction to Other Wybie not being able to talk.
Glad to see someone have a reasonable reaction to Other Wybie not being able to talk.
10/25/2020 c7 B.E.A.T.N
Aw, that last moment was pretty cute. Also, nice job working in the part with Wybie and the tennis ball machine.
Aw, that last moment was pretty cute. Also, nice job working in the part with Wybie and the tennis ball machine.
10/25/2020 c5 B.E.A.T.N
That dream sequence would've actually been a great addition to the movie. It's such a creepy moment! You captured it very well.
That dream sequence would've actually been a great addition to the movie. It's such a creepy moment! You captured it very well.