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I think you have an interesting story idea here, but there are a lot of errors which distract from the story. It could use editing to fix the punctuation, capitalization, and some of the words (for example, the beginning sentence says "journey" instead of "Germany"). Otherwise, so far you have introduced the characters nicely, and I found the code "two foxes and their vixen" to be rather amusing.
I think you have an interesting story idea here, but there are a lot of errors which distract from the story. It could use editing to fix the punctuation, capitalization, and some of the words (for example, the beginning sentence says "journey" instead of "Germany"). Otherwise, so far you have introduced the characters nicely, and I found the code "two foxes and their vixen" to be rather amusing.