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1/5 c6 Marcia Santos
Hello, happy 2021!
After years it's good to know that The Mentalist fics are still on. Can't wait for next chapter.
1/5 c6 Martarafa
I don't know if it'is the longing or what but it seems to me that you have improved a lot in your writing and in the plots. I find all the characters very well treated, very in character. Always they are but now more. Even the way Jane acts under such great pressure. I love how you've managed to get him out of the lockdown over Lisbon's disappearance so credibly, how he's started to think. And very good idea to use "Visualize".
On the other hand, Lisbon's situation is terrible, I don't know how she is strong enough not to break.
I am looking forward to continue reading the continuation.
Thank you very much for writing and sharing.
Sorry for my english
1/4 c6 Fucktheroles
Ouch! I'm being so nervous and jumpy when reading this, but the atmosphere is great and so realistic it hurts. I can't imagine how Jane copes with Lisbon's disappearance though, his suffering is very painful to me. What I want to say is I think it is brilliant how you capture their characters and break my heart so easily!

Also I've been curious about those goodbye videos... I've searched the net looking for those and haven't found any examples yet. Is it really a thing or just an elaborate fiction? Regardless, it's a good idea.

I love that you've decided to explore the connection between Red John and Visualize - the show really missed out on the explanation and I was so disappointed! I think I'm starting to like where you're going with it - very logical and reasonable, bravo!

Thanks for writing and sharing, your work brings me joy.
/Anya
1/2 c6 ReadingVoraciously
Red John, the baby daddy from hell!.Counting on Jane, the old CBI team and the FBI to take the real Red John down and out for good!
1/2 c6 ChrisLettShipper47
This was a major adrenaline rush ! damn Partridge !
This was also heartbreaking seeing both Lisbon and Jane's helplessness especially amidst their new founded happiness ... I guess Jane has to get over his emotional wreckage state to save Lisbon
loved the update and HAPPY NEW YEAR :D
1/1 c6 Lindex0316
Happy New Year. Great stories take you on the roller coaster ride of emotions with the characters and this story is no different. I think I stopped breathing with the goodbye video and was screaming in my head to not watch the video. Great chapter I cannot wait for the next.
1/1 c6 3omalleyspub
I got so excited when I saw this had been updated! It’s so well written and the plot is so interesting. I can’t wait to see where this goes and how long it takes the team to find Lisbon! Thanks for the update.
1/1 c6 80Idan
I’m glad you’re bringing in a Visualize angle—one of my big problems with the show’s Red John arc was the way that just kind of faded out. Partridge makes a creepy and very believable Red John, and this plot is suitably horrifying. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
1/1 c2 Patresa
I'm sorry that I didn't continue reading this, because my exam dates had declared. And at every notification, for a new chapter, I had to restrain myself, "Saying not now but soon."
Anyway now that the exams are over and I have some time, I'm going to indulge in this story. Damn, it's getting interesting in here. Excited to read more.
1/1 c6 3MartyMc49
Wow. Very exciting. Hope Grace made a good find. Good that Jane has his friends to surround him and keep his hopes high. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
1/1 c6 elliraha
I wish Jane find lisbon soon
1/1 c6 Guest
Nice plotting. Thank you for the new year gift and happy 2021 to you and everyone here.
1/1 c6 DONNIE LYNCH
as usual a great chapter...keep up the great work.
1/1 c6 Hanna Konwent
Cudowna, pikna historia. Arcydzieo, znakomita fabua rewelacyjne pisarstwo. Dzikuj za pisanie. Ogromna szkoda e tak mao piszesz dla Mentalisty Kocham t histori. Z ogromn niecierpliwoci czekam na kontynuacj. Szczliwego Nowego Roku z Polski dla Ciebie i Twojej Rodziny.
1/1 c6 roseyrulip
ahhh great chapter again! great way to start the new year :)
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