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10h c1 Babysis64
oh no I wonder who was talking to who here. I wonder if the father and daughter both died
1/9 c21 33cathy29jes
Hello,
she's not going to be happy to have lost all of her new friends Bella, even if she didn't totally agree with them, Jasper is going to have to deploy treasures of diplomacy to tame her, but Jake risks being transformed on doggie if he lets Bella wake up before Jasper comes back
excellent chapter
cathy
1/9 c20 cathy29jes
Hello,
Jasper is finally starting to see the light, I think Carlisle is trying to track Bella down to hand her as a parcel to anyone who would be willing to pay for it, not very shiny from Patriarch Cullen, Edward seems to be trying to make up for it , something that will never happen now that Charlie is dead because they all moved out leaving Bella alone to face Victoria and it was Charlie who paid the full price, Jacob either is not in. scent of sanctity from Bella, no shapeshifter is either, if it was possible for Bella she would wipe out vampires and guardians,
excellent chapter,
cathy
1/8 c21 SassYNoleS
Whilst I am glad that Bella and also Jasper are able to get away .. I am sad that Santiago will be destroyed ..

So cannot wait for more!
1/8 c20 SassYNoleS
I absolutely loved Jasper's no bullshit talk with Carlisle hahahaha ! It cracked me up .. and the fact that he didn't want anything to do with Edward either was gold ...

Our Major sure is smart .. he's clued on about Bella .
1/8 c20 CentauRita
BINGO!
Aha...Jasper has put two and two, together- Equals- Bella.

Thank you for your update.
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
1/8 c21 sicefield
Great story... Hate to see Bella so bitter, but better bitter than a dish rag... Ugh what a choice... Always love your stories thanx for your time and effort
1/8 c21 1tinac
Wow these two chapters have gotten intense. I am so excited for more.
1/8 c21 31pegasus5406
Well, I'm glad Jasper is smart and figuring out a little of what's going on...I also hope that Bella will be out until Jasper gets back to her...I think that if Jasper can get Bella to understand what's going on the two of them will figure out what to do...great update hon...I love it and can't wait to read more...thanks, huggs. Peggy
1/8 c21 kouga's older woman
The wolves are helping Jasper?
1/8 c21 shoegirl01
Can’t wait to see what happens next!
1/8 c21 17DarylDixon'sLover
Great chapter
1/7 c19 CentauRita
Bella has never really followed directions very well and it should have been Bella's blood shed instead of Joe's as it would probably lure in Victoria, more quickly.

Thank you for your update.
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
1/7 c18 CentauRita
This chappie gave me a thrill!

Thank you for your update.
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
1/7 c17 CentauRita
Here's to success under fire!

Thank you for your update and your ending A\N to the chappie.
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
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