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12/17/2020 c3 24sheppardlover928
So these automaton robots were over-protective but now want revenge for being left alone? But the voices were trying to communicate with John and didnt want to hurt him, so im thinking they just recognized his ATA gene and need something—but why he is unconscious is a mystery...
12/10/2020 c4 21shepsgirl72
Aww. You have to feel sorry for the automatons, abandoned but still with a desperate need to fulfil their programming. The Ancients were good at throwing things out and not handling them properly when they went wrong!

Thanks for finishing the story even though you’ve been unwell. I hope your surgery goes smoothly and you are soon feeling much, much better.
12/10/2020 c4 BMick
Thank you very much for this. I haven't always had much luck with stories being finished... Looking at you, Littleforest.

So you're waiting for surgery? Not fun, waiting. May the time pass swiftly, and the surgery be ultimately swift and uncomplicated. Soon, I hope you follow Sheppard's example and awaken to the friendly sound of a stable heart monitor.

Best wishes!
11/29/2020 c3 shepsgirl72
Well, this doesn't sound good. What exactly is it these automatons want from John? If they are harbouring a grudge toward the Ancients, John's genetics make him a prime target for trouble, that's for sure.
11/28/2020 c2 Sheppardlover928
Soem kind of being that lives on the planet has invaded John’s mind-because of his ATA gene—and it make kill him?! Glad thry got to the gate and hopefully Carson will help him—-but i’m wondering if everyone on Atlantis who has the ATA gene will be affected —and Atlantis itself?!
11/28/2020 c1 Sheppardlover928
Great description of the Sandstorm! Love a good mhstery—why is John unconscious? His team has no idea?! Did he get bit by an insect or something? And od course, even unconscious, John needs to suffer!
11/27/2020 c2 BMick
Curiouser and curiouser...
11/25/2020 c2 24SuperMom1
Interesting! I wonder who these beings who are trying to communicate with John are and why?
11/24/2020 c1 Guest 64
Great start! I can't wait to see where this goes!
11/24/2020 c1 BMick
Finally made an attempt at cleaning out my e-mails and was well-rewarded by a new story. Interesting beginning with ominous overtones, even in the summary... More? Please? You're one of the better writers currently active - loved 'Enola', too.
11/24/2020 c1 21shepsgirl72
Intriguing start. I wonder what has caused John to fall so deeply asleep. Nothing good, I'm sure!
11/24/2020 c1 Js
Very interesting story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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