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12/14 c1 2HidingSomething
Heya!

I saw that you wrote a fic in English, and came to check it out :3
Your English is fantastic by the way, I wouldn't notice a difference between yours and a native English speaker!
To me this is a very strong opening chapter, a good mix of suspense and an introduction to what the story's going to be about. I also like your summary, it has that hook to draw readers in. The premise is interesting and I'm glad to see you developing something with it.

I'll be going through the chapters, but probably at snail pace because I'm so busy ;w;
Cheers!
11/30 c1 Zeriame
You're now in the other side. Kinda funny, not gonna lie. May you flourish here too !
11/29 c1 chestnutpoby
This is interesting tho I wish it would be more comedy and sexy romance (of yukimura being in control and touchy) jk *don't mind me* instead of angst but but this is just my opinion, it's your story and surely you have an awesome plot for this story. Good luckk!

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