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12/12/2020 c4 FavoriteReader
Ok, what's going on? Every time I refresh the page to this chapter, there's this weird caption that says "p style "margin:0in; font-family: Calibri" over and over again. I can't see any of the dialogue to this chapter
12/13/2020 c4 1AngetianPrincess18
I'm curious as to why Harrow's grandfather is the ruler at the moment instead of his parents. I mean Armin seems like a nice guy and he was pretty kind to Viren but I'm still curious as where Harrow's parents are and they're ok or not. I can understand Viren not remembering or knowing the name of his nursemaid (or surrogate mother, whichever one fits) but not knowing his own family name? How could his father do that? I hope we get to see the High Mage soon, I mean his interest and skills in Dark Magic had to come somewhere,right?

Keep up the good work

-AngetianPrincess18
12/11/2020 c3 AngetianPrincess18
* sees sonnet * Unexpected, but not unwelcome

I like it despite it's melancholy tone. He never felt from his own father, and that's a horrible feeling

Hope to see more. Keep up the good work

-AngetianPrincess18
12/6/2020 c2 AngetianPrincess18
Glad you updated. I think it was kinda nice that he essentially had a nursemaid that was like a mother to him, too bad he doesn't know her name. It would've made a nice family reunion if he did. The way his father emotionally neglected him kind of explains why he is the way he is, especially with how Viren treats Soren. Also, is this Diana a reference to the real Princess Diana who died in 1997? I'm fine if it isn't, I'm just asking. Makes me wonder what's gonna happen now. How Viren and Harrow will meet each other, how they'll interact and the High Mage that lived at the castle before Viren. Keep up the good work

-AngetianPrincess18
11/29/2020 c1 AngetianPrincess18
I am intrigued. I kinda guessed that Viren was in his 40's in the show. May I say that it wouldn't be surprising if Viren's father is abusive? Maybe they'll say so in the show,maybe they won't. But I am curious to see where your story goes. I can imagine Viren talking exactly this here, that's a good sign of a good writer. Keep up the good work.

-AngetianPrincess18

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